Reviews for When You Were Ready
snow eopard chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
love it by the way
BlueSilverPandas chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
Agreed, New Moon really should have ended this way. *nodnod* Great job
avid reader chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
this is cute...it's soft and easy.
Afflictionseclipsedbyglory chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
This was beautiful :D woww, you're talented girl :)
Crushed Hale.x chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
Wow. That was beautiful. I have a tear in my eye.

Theres not enough words to describe how wonderfl this was. So i'll go wuth 3..I loved it!

Thank you for putting this up! Your an amazing writer! 3

xO
arianz chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
Aw! Just perfect!
eatlesschickin chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...write a sequel. :) this was awesome.
katielove82 chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Love it!
Deweyetta chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
great job please write a sequel!
CSOllie21 chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
i had never thought of this until i read this story...i love this its great! very well written
ellemm chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
Loved it.

Beautiful storyline. Characters well depicted. Great alternative ending.

Small suggestion - POV change right at the end re "her eyes" could be refined.

Absolutely loved it. All the best
twilight-forever00 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
this is a really good story. although im an edward bella type i still loved this. plz continue it
bandgeek216 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
i completely agree! :) :)
YaoiFanGirl1990 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
I will have to say you should continue this because the emphasis on victoria still after her and the deal made to the volturi about her turning of course. That would make a most excelent story, so yea you should continue you this PM me if you do _
lileyfan123 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
I wish that is how the book and Movie ended. I prefer the Jacob and Bella to her and Edward. To me Jacob is like the perfect match for her. Cant wait to see what else you write
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