Reviews for Astral
levysbookshelf chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
I enjoyed it a lot!
Jenmoon1 chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
really hot
FallenAngel1129 chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
I think, thoug its hard to visualize how Kuro is viewing the scene from two perspectives, it was well written and nicely done. Interesting and original concept. And it was hard for me to visualize how he was seeing things mostly because its not something I've ever done lol. Follow me?
atlaobsession chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Okay you need to stop writing such sexy fanfiction . . .
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Wow... hot... XD
Little D. Xylie chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
TheGoth24 chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
A Neverending Dream of Flight chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
That was freaking amazing. Your use of perspectives was absolutely mindboggling, possibly the best sex scene I've read (or at least right up there). I love the way you write Fai and Kurogane, their personalities just seem to fit perfectly. Great job and keep up the good work
Funky Bracelet Chick chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
That was awesome-sauce.
KuroFaiSplee chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Oh gosh. I've always wondered how and if Fai would use magic during sex. This was a very creative idea... and very raunchy. Brilliant!
LullabyDust chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
This was positively amazing; I love you forever for writing this
k-shee chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
My brain fizzed out of my ears. I'd give my left arm to have a porno like that, haha! Fai blowing the kiss was the icing on the cake. Excuse me while I get heavy-duty tampons to stem my nosebleed.
Purple Witchy Angel chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Interesting... and Funny! ;
Kyoki Kiss chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
smut smut smut smut smutty smut! XD
Siren Lawliet chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
HOLY GOD. Not only was that well written but it was one of the two HOTTEST, SEXIEST KuroFai fics I've ever read!

Just...DAMN! I applaud you. That was fucking sexy. 3
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