|Reviews for Forbidden|
| IAmNotUsingThisAnyMore chapter 4 . 8/16/2012
The changes seem to be happening rapidly...
Maybe make the changes a bit more slow, as to let the population become used to it...
| Piiiiiiiiii chapter 3 . 9/7/2010
So I finally finished it!
Cool story update it nao!
Love Your Bestestest friend.
| Midnight Zero591591 chapter 3 . 6/21/2010
those where good. I liked how you made the story before all the changes had happened at not during or after Jonas and Gabe left. It made things more... Interesting in a way.
| revier chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
You said pink tongue. THey can't see color...lol but still it's good!
| caramel729cucumber chapter 3 . 4/24/2010
Hmm, interesting. You could do with a bit more plot development, description, and longer chapters, but this looks really promising and I'll definitely keep reading!
| 3.1415927 chapter 3 . 2/13/2010
HEY! I didn't read this, but if you can write Fan-Fiction, you can talk to me. *fumes*
| sweetlilsunshine chapter 2 . 12/23/2009
um... it's ok
except the people in "The Giver" didn't even know animals were real, let alone own them.
| anonymus chapter 2 . 12/20/2009
WHY OH WHY! There are no stinking feelings at ALL in this book!
| maddiebo97 chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
La la la! That's pretty good!
| MapleKittenn chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
omg wow this is really amazing! such a nice way of words i love it
| aspiringarchaeologist chapter 2 . 12/11/2009
| singstar15 chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
I think it sounds interesting. So these 2 people have feelings? I read the book awhile ago so i could be missing something. Nicely written though.