Reviews for Kaylie Trixie Racer
1999324 chapter 6 . 2/26/2012
Haha, very interesting. I noticed you had a little of "The Little Mermaid 2" in it. Pretty good, keep up the good work. I'd like to see what happens next! :)
Rockerchick09 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
hey love the story but it is kind of copyng the little mermaid when her daughter runs away from home and trys to find the under water kingdom so change it up a little bit
cyndll chapter 5 . 12/6/2009
please update soon. Also try to fix some of the grammer and sentance structure. it's kind of hard to read and figure out what you're saying when you're leaving words out as well as repeating them, it's also kind of distracting. so if you could fix that, i would be forever grateful.
Gentlelady chapter 2 . 11/27/2009
Very good beginning. You have a plausable plot and the characters are very lifelike. Please continue the story.