|Reviews for After|
| AngelRose7 chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
Love your work: I'm reading Pelant at the moment but felt like something lighter tonight. This was so great! when I have caught up with the show fully, (I'm mid-season 9 now), I know your work will help keep me going between fixes.
I have written a piece & want to post it, but it's a while since I've posted here & I can't remember how :(
Please write more
| Pheonix1995 chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Great story - Loved the fluffiness and glad she stayed!
| Artemisbeloved chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
How come no one has woken me up like this yet.. hmm well now i know what to wish for.. well besides SEQUELS that is hihihi
| MentalistLover13 chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Great little story! I really liked it:)
| crazygirl411 chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Hi I really loved your story, it was long and cute and just a bit is something I do want to say though,you spelled Mohamed wrong it is spelled ,and keep the storys coming!PLEASE
| bb-4ever chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
excellent "after" fic thank goodness neither ran. sweet fluffiness just what they deserve and i enjoy reading. look forward to more from you
| Tango Mike Charlie chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
very sweet story :)
| Chibi chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
Such a good story! I don't normally enjoy smut that much, usually only perfectly tastefully (a.k.a. none of the words "cock", "pussy", and/or "cum" in the story) but this particular example was exquisite. I love me some Booth! Thanks so much for writing. I think you stayed fairly true to the characters general personalities, also. Now, if only this would happen in the show!
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| jmbatt chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
I really enjoyed this story. The way they talked, and Brennan pushed to make the first move. I liked too, how Booth didn't want to give "them" up. The fact that Brennan realized she hadn't run, meant something to her as well - she realized she could love and be loved, and that would be important for her. Nice job w/this - you had them in character while making love, while talking and laughing, even when they were in the bathroom together it seemed very realistic! Will there be more to this story or is it a one-shot? I liked how Brennan mentioned the "friends w/benefits"!
| Katj21 chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
You tell an interesting story, which I enjoyed, however you use way too many commas. One long sentence with several commas is okay once in a while. However, particularly in the first half of your story, you have long sentences one after the other and it becomes rather stilted and difficult to read. I've noticed this in some of your other fics.
Again, I'm enjoying your stories, and I look forward to the next one you post. :)
| Pyrate Nyre chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
This was full of fluffy and I liked it.
| EvilRegal96 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Loved itt to are an amazing writer
| RowdyRomantic chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
A beautiful and loving B&B fiction!
Brennan was in perfect character! as was Booth ...but Bones was spot on!
| kokobun chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
wow-you are an awesome writer and you seem to have these characters down pat!