Reviews for The Awakening: The Revised Edition
TheWateringWizard chapter 43 . 5/19
Jobal is seriously getting on my nerves...
TheWateringWizard chapter 41 . 5/19
Vader makes laugh so much sometimes... Defeated Anakin? You NEVER had a single STRAIGHT fight with him! The first time he was in shock at the revelation and then you and Palpy took advantage of it and blasted a fucking metric ton of Force Lightning in his body before you tried and failed to kill him. On Bespin you had to torture him for who knows how long and even then he best you in a force power confrontation. In a normal fight, he'd beat the Sith out you. The only thing that would keep you alive is the fact that he wouldn't be able to deal the killing blow.

Vader stop your delusions, you very well know that you can't beat Anakin properly...
TheWateringWizard chapter 40 . 5/19
Oh no please kill Clovis
TheWateringWizard chapter 39 . 5/19
Okay now kill Bane and kill Clovis and I'll be happy
TheWateringWizard chapter 38 . 5/19
Here's a little problem, Luke's training goes exactly like it went in canon BUT he's had 4 YEARS before with Anakin, Ahsoka and Obi-Wan. So you should've changed some of the stuff he does and says. That's the problem with writers trying to follow canon while having grade changes earlier: the changes will have impacted the Canon and you can't follow everything exactly like it was. In this story, the BIG change is that Luke had a LOT of training previous to Yoda compared to canon.
TheWateringWizard chapter 37 . 5/19
Threepio the cockblocker! Han must've been sweating bullets when he felt Anakin's gaze on him
TheWateringWizard chapter 36 . 5/19
Leia and Han are adorable! And Leia's insults always crack me up!
TheWateringWizard chapter 35 . 5/19
I wanna see Anakin bash that dirty slime Clovis' face in! I hate that guy
TheWateringWizard chapter 34 . 5/19
Ohhh another baby girl! She must be so cute!
TheWateringWizard chapter 33 . 5/18
Hey I hope that once the Emperor is dead and Vader too, that Padme and Anakin will beat the hell out of Clovis. He's a real piece of shit
TheWateringWizard chapter 32 . 5/18
Hahaha Han being a little jealous? So cute
TheWateringWizard chapter 31 . 5/18
Well done! But I have to remark on something you mentioned earlier: the fact that a lot of the stuff that happens in the star wars universe and in fanfictions isn't rational. Here I take for example Cad Bane and Bobba. Why did he spare Cad? Because he's defenseless? Come on man! Time to wake the fuck up! It's not time for honor and mercy. This is a bounty who kill your family and/or deliver them and you to Vader before he'd consider doing something honorable! Kill him to protect your family. You let him live knowing he'll come back to harm the ones you love because of some stupid code?! This isn't the time for this kind of shit man! But the problem we face is plot. If Bane dies now, it takes out a problem and antagonist.

Same with Bobba. Why on earth did they not finish him off?! Ahsoka come on! You have to put the security of this big family over honor or a simple come of an Order that's nearly extinct for God's fucking sake!
TheWateringWizard chapter 30 . 5/18
Okay... Bane with a sword... You'd better take care... Anakin has had years of training as a Jedi, he will destroy Bane. Plus he has Ahsoka and Luke with him. On the other hand Padme is protected by Rex, Obi-wan, Han and Chewie so I assume she's safe...
TheWateringWizard chapter 29 . 5/18
I LOVE that sent, sultry side of Padme that we never got to see in canon! Little Jaycen is so cute, cutting in his parents passion. Did you choose Jaden in reference to Jacen Solo?
TheWateringWizard chapter 28 . 5/18
I see what you're doing here! Rex and Sola...
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