Perhaps late to the party. But I just come across this story in my down time. Enjoying it so far. Did you know that in this chapter you have Miroku calling kagome- kagome. When she is suppose to be kekki? In front of the others I mean. Once while driving and then again while everyone is getting their bags.
LUV_ANGEL (offline reading)

It's a shame that you discontinued the story. But still thanks for putting it up, it pleasured in giving me laugh fest so...thanks for that. It was just what I needed after finishing some dramatic InuKag fics. I don't know if I should bother giving any constructive criticism or whatever but hey who cares, I don't even know if you'll be reading this review. Buuuut if you must know(more like, if I must say...), there were several plot holes or flaws or whatever they're called in the story. You know. Those things that don't add up. Like Miroku calling 'Kekki' Kagome infront of everyone during the ride to the beach. And Kagome still worrying bout Sango calling her Kag, even though she'd already explains that Kekki's whole name was also Kagome...that was a dumb excuse to believe btw but I must give you credit for trying haha :)
And then there's also Rin. Who was like supposed to be with Souta and all (was that her? Oh god what if I'm mistaken and it was some other girl...I'll be embarrassing myself...meh who cares the way I remember it is it WAS Rin with Souta in that festival) then she makes an appearance in a later chappie with this crush on Sesshy and Kagome doesn't even notice her or sumthin. Yeah but who cares bout those plot holes anyway, I had fun! And hell yeah to Inuyasha and Miroku singing and ukelele-ing and being chased off by dear ol' Granpa. And daaaaamn to Inuyasha and Miroku stripping and dancing to that too sexy song in Sango's party! You got a wild mind dude (I'm actually starting to wonder whether you've ever done this before in real life...you know, pretend to be a guy when you actually are a girl...)
I'm rambling now. But one more thing, I absolutely LOVE Miroku here. I'm not a big fan of his but damn you make me wanna ship for MiroKag in this one sorry. Soooo I guess that's that! It was a fun ride and I wished you would have finished but meh it was still fun nonetheless! KEEP WRITING (maybe not this one but writing fics in general I guess)!

WOOO!

PS: This reminds me of Hana kimi btw. You know it and I know so. Hana kimi was fun too. Do you know they have that japanese remake of it? Haven't watched the remake but I'm seriously interested. Anyway. I'm rambling again so for real, this is the end of my review!

You don't know how happy I am to have found this story again! This was my very first fanfiction and brings back so many memories. It's worth reading over and over even though it's incomplete. I wish it had been finished. This is still my very favorite story and I hope that maybe one day we'll all get the ending we've all been craving!

cool storeh

OOOoooOOOh Niceee Storrrrry :D
Wonder when Kag will tell Inu her 'Identity'
;)
Nice story,VEEEERY original :)
I especially LOVE chapter 14!
LLOOOOOVE IT!
-Ciao

Hahahahahahahah xD
Hilarious!
I love the part :

"Bells will ring ting-a-ling-a-ling, ting-a-ling-a-ling,
And you'll sing 'Vita bella'.
Hearts will play tippy-tippy-tay, tippy-tippy-tay,
Like a gay tarantella."
"What the hell's a tarantella?" I heard Miroku ask Inuyasha.
"Beats me. Shut up and keep singing," was Inuyasha's response.
"They're gay, though?"
"Happy, Miroku. Now sing!"

xD So *gasp* Freakin'Hilarious xD

Well, I'm a girl, but I act more like a boy. I get what u mean, especially since I'm friends with a lot more boys than girls.

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Lawl, rereading for the 3rd time...still love it

I saw my review before, in November, and I said WOW, THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I'D SAY! and then I looked at Yuffie and said Oh. I wrote that.

I really really loved this story(especially the amazing pov and comments) and I am in love with Inu. Thanks for writing, Clara.

This story is sooo awsome and i love it and i'm pretty sad that you discontinued it and i hope that someday u start updating it again.I also hope that u won't discontinue anymore of your stories,CYA

What. The. Frick.

This is not cool. This is not frickin cool.
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! Y U HAVE TO END IT!

You are one of my favorite authors! I love Inuyasha! I love this plot and the awesome characters! Why do all the amazing fanfics have to be incomplete!

I wish you had continued. The story was getting really good.

Jaylonni Love

this is hilarious. 'nuff saiddd. back to reading. :D

when kagome going to tell inuyasha she's a girl

sooooo good! I kinda wish that it had more inu kag stuff tho.. maybe he should find out? idk, but PLEASE write more! :P