|Reviews for Dusters|
| stoner1396 chapter 31 . 5/18/2013
I found this on here thinking it would be a good way to pass time but once i started reading i literally could not stop! You are an amazing author
| bobshady chapter 5 . 6/28/2012
i love this story and the rest of the series. can you write more about a courier who supports the legion? most of them are about a courier who support the ncr or house. all well and good but it gets old.
| Russianbear0027 chapter 31 . 2/5/2012
That was brilliant! I nearly cried. Well, it's hard to make more thorough comments on a mobile device, so suffice it to say that I'm definitely sticking around for your other writings.
| Jakyll chapter 31 . 11/26/2011
An amazing story, from beginning to end. You had me reading this thing from one end to the other with little to no time inbetween. I spent hours reading this into the morning and I do not regret it. I may have missed a few things thanks to sleep deprivation as I type this, don't hold me 100% accountable.
On the criticism side:
I felt that some more detail could have been given to the characters. Story-wise, superb, but actual physical descriptions and personalities were lost in translation to me. I could rely on the characters each having one or two quirks, but that doesn't make them full-fledged individuals. The personal stories made up for this.
You did character humor well, I found myself getting a few good and honest laughs between the Brotherhood of Steel's Knight Rufus and his Initiate. The humor between these characters and your main characters was different, and I feel that this hurt and helped you.
There were parts of this that were poetic and amazing with, the action-orientated bits were also good. These two would've been even greater mixed together a few more times.
The character stories added some needed depth to each of the characters, especially Sven. His comic relief role was a bit overplayed but that can be remedied by mixing it up a little. A good way to fix this would be adding in more tidbits like his 'conversations' with Galatius, followed up by Kail. That added some fresh humor to him.
All in all, amazing story. I'm going to go to sleep now. Wake up. And start on your sequel.
| Billy Bob 2010 chapter 3 . 11/5/2011
nice, very nice. Good job till next time peace out and thanks for the good read
| Billy Bob 2010 chapter 2 . 11/2/2011
Great job. Till next time peace out and thanks
| Billy Bob 2010 chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Ah very nice, very nice indeed. But only if it started with WAR, WAR NEVER CHANGES. AH but you did a good job setting the mood none the less. So till next time peace out. Can't wait till FALLOUT 4. Cause New Vegas is to dam buggy, so buggy it killed my PS3 first time i played it, NO LIE. and it was a disappointment.
| BeGodlyBeLynn chapter 31 . 2/26/2011
Oh lawdy. That was amazing. I am still grinning like a fool.
Love everything about the writing, from the little snippets from religious works at the beginning to the well-rounded characters to the plot and the imagery, OMG the imagery XD. You tell it like it is, and you paint the Wasteland so well. I especially loved how your characters may have been Regulators, but they all had different motives and none of them were perfect, not even close. It reminds us how were soo not perfect either. Great work by you, and I'm going to indulge in your other works of genius. :D
| BeGodlyBeLynn chapter 2 . 2/24/2011
Found this story through the Arlington Archives community and I must say, I'm intrigued. This is a very realistic and well-written portrait of the post-nuclear wasteland. Kay, shutting up now, to keep on reading :)
| RaZoRMandiblez chapter 31 . 2/9/2011
That...that was just beautiful. That is all. On to the next one!
| RaZoRMandiblez chapter 16 . 2/7/2011
I usually wait till the end of a story to review it, but after that last chapter, I don't think there's anything you can do to to change my opinion of this story: pure, unadulterated AWESOME. Its rare to come across quality writing like this. I swear, its the possibility of stumbling across something like this that keeps me happily in love with this site. You've done the rarest, most difficult thing a fanfiction author can do. You've taken a setting, absorbed it, and produced something brilliant and original. The characters, the setting, the emotion, everything just works. It fits into the universe perfectly. I could easily picture this as an expansion to the game and the world of fallout. I cant wait to take in the rest of this story!
| SomeGuyOverHere chapter 31 . 12/5/2010
| Wragnaroq chapter 6 . 6/15/2010
Huh. For some reason, whenever I picture Scribe Kail, I come up with an image of Doctor Frasier from Stargate SG1. Is that wrong?
| fallen-wolfborn chapter 31 . 5/4/2010
Kickass. nuff said
| Wolf chapter 30 . 5/3/2010
That is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, Its sad that Sven, James, Carl, and Adam died. I liked their characters, they died to save a world full of evil, because they believed it was repairable. I wish they hadn't died, but I guess thats your choice. Good story. Great Story.