Reviews for His Wish
crystalblue19 chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Aw, this makes me feel bad for Lance, his motivation is good even though he's going about it the wrong way. :3
Lily of the Valli chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
It's nicely written. Lance inner monologue is really sad. He is torn between his love to Yellow and his deisre to create better world. He chooses the second one and hopes she will understand when time passes.

"A man can wish, cant he?" This is my favourite sentance. It the best sums up Lance's inner confcit.

It creeps me out a little becouse of 10 year diffence, when Yellow is only 11. But still I really like this story.
kittykatloren chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
This is really sweet - a nice analysis of Lance's motivations and character. Good read!

- Kitty
KitsPokePeople chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
That was nice!

I like grantedshipping some what!

This was a cool one!
sheepeater chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
It's getting late, so I only have time to read one of your stories, Ama-chan! I'll get the rest in the morning, though.

Now on to the story

Aww, you make me feel so bad for Lance! Poor guy... D: I think you really got inside his head.

And I just love your use of vocabulary; you're very descriptive. I can picture the scene clearly in my mind.

-Sora (This is Unknown from MF, btw :)