|Reviews for Alone|
| DoctorDash chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
I like it, a few spelling/grammer mistakes here and there, but hey, it happens to everyone.
But I still can't imagine Vahn EVER talking, thats the side effect of being main character, you can't speak
| MarsDjinniSpark chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
How adorable! Great story. XD Love iiiiiiiiiiitttttt!
| CrimsonRaine87 chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Aww! It was a cute little love story, so sweet But you should probably go back and fix the mistakes. It doesn't just make the story look nice but you might think of new things to add on while going back through it. I don't know how many times I came up with new ideas while reviewing my story lol. It's just a thought though, it's your story so it's your choice.
| xxLunaTerraxx chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
awwwwww so cuute! I think I got a tooth ache what with all the sweetness. _ Despite some spelling mistakes it was really good. There needs to be more fics about these two.
| AniGirl 7 chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
I haven't read a Legaia fic in a loong time but I've always been a fan on Vahn and Noa. I saw a few spelling and grammar mistakes but this was still a nice story. :)