Reviews for Scarlet Fox
Guest chapter 2 . 1/22
found this story while looking for an older Sly Cooper fanfic it's a shame this never got finished it had lots of potential
Teo Fredrikson chapter 4 . 7/30/2012
you make awesome stories and look forward to the next chapter!
cheesebread222 chapter 4 . 6/15/2012
wow, this is...great. i don't have any other words to describe it. please update this story again soon.
NinjaxSketcheartx chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Hope you update soon!
CagedSnow chapter 4 . 9/18/2011
I... cannot say anything positive that two previous previous reveiwers have not said. This is an... interest... consequence... of Sly's lie to be with Carmelita. Now, she's officially dead, and unofficial the globe's biggest crime queen.

That all said, while it is a 'golden' story, more than worthy of being reccomended...

... I miss Sly. XD I'm sorry, but... well, I would love to see when they interact, though it may be because of my liking of Carm and Sly together.

That all said, keep it up.
aslan333 chapter 4 . 9/14/2011
good chapter.
Krimz chapter 3 . 6/22/2011
You know, it's a real shame that the Sly Cooper section is not enormous, because you really do deserve all the possible praise and reaction to this wonderful, exciting piece you have going. This is just so colorful and purpose-driven that I am oh-so hungry for more, even after a nice and meaty third chapter. What's there not to love?

The balance you've created between the Carmelita and Carmen characterizations is fantastic - though she's Carmen, she's still Carmelita, even though she doesn't quite feel like it and definitely doesn't look like it. The well-placed mentions of her past life are always so well-timed so that the reader doesn't ever forget the backstory of the character we're dealing with, even after ten years. Every sad mention of Sly makes me sad and Carmelita's reactions are so understated and perfect... I just really enjoy the interpersonal interactions beneath all of the riveting and well-written action sequences!

The Neyla aspect is absolutely an incredible thing. Just like with Carmen/Carmelita, you've established the same Neyla but with new and totally believable traits - the medication aspect is so perfect both as sadly comedic and just plain sad. Not only did you create a Neyla that Carmelita could pity, but that we could pity!

This is so golden and I'm so pumped about it. I cannot wait for more and I certainly hope you feel inspired about it because not only is it the best Cooper story I've read, but it's probably up there with the best I've read, especially in terms of keeping true to canon! Thank you oh so much for sharing this; if I can find some sort of Sly fan community outside of to pimp this story, I totally will. Ya need a trillion readers. :)
Count Kulalu chapter 2 . 6/21/2011
I have a question about the story, or more specifically about Carmen. I know that this new member is the group's tech expert, but she seems to specialize in computer programing and electronics control more to me, but I think that's because she just got here so we haven't seen her full capabilities.

I bring this up because as a watcher of the cartoon show, Carmen usually had a secret method to use as a getaway that usually involved technology. I mean, in the theme song she jumps off the Statue of Liberty only to reveal a mechanical winged jetpack to fly away. Would we be seeing any of that?

I also liked how you have her leaving a calling card. However, will you also have her leaving clues as to where she is going next? I could see her doing that with the Cooper gang to Either have Sly chase her, or to have Jing be granted a means of communicating with her father. Although, going with the fact that anything orinally done in the shows or games is an exageration or a means to discredit Carmen in the story, I'm not sure if you just plan on ignoring that detail. I wouldn't blame you if you did, I personally think a master thief like Carmen San Diego wouldn't really leave such easy puzzles or intricate clues to follow. I think the games and shows just did that so the player would have a chance to stop her like any other hero versus villain conflict. Maybe you could point that out if you decide not to go with that.

Other than that, I can see that your building up a good trail of character development. I was worried that this would be one of those replace a character, but still keep their name and face stories. Instead, I find your doing exceedingly welll with displaying CArmen's conflict with herself and others. Not only does it look like she'll have to team up with her enemies, but she'll have todeal with the fact that she is no longer herself, inside and out. The same could be said for Neyla, who is also dealing with her inner demonsn. I also have to give you credit for her too because you actually made me pity and like her. Now that takes serious writing and storytelling skills.

So I thank you for writing this story, and will definitely continue to read it if you continue as well.

P. S. For the Carmen and Neyla in bed scene, I have one thing I must say:

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JakCooperThePlumber chapter 3 . 6/21/2011
Ooooooooo, I'm loving this story! I can't wait until the next chapter. But please, take your time. Most people don't like it when people like you spent such a long time to come out with chapters, but that only means it'll be all the better. Not to mention, your chapters are long. I can't wait to see who all the other members of VILE are going to be.
Count Kulalu chapter 3 . 6/19/2011
Oh, do please continue! I really enjoy reading this story!
Count Kulalu chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Another Marvelous story well written and imagined!
Deltathewolf chapter 3 . 6/15/2011
Very well written and an excellent story idea!

A little OOC in some areas, but that's kind of the point, isn't it?

Anyway, I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter.

-Delta-
Cross177 chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
Knight, I. AM. LOVING THIS!

Truly excellent. Love how you got Carmelita as Carmen Sandiego. God, have not heard that name and series in a long ass time. Keep it up dude.
Rising Bashir chapter 3 . 6/13/2011
Once again, I am truly impressed by the concept and length of this story. It is an amazing idea, and the execution is great; I think this will prove to be a superb story.
JakCooperThePlumber chapter 2 . 2/28/2011
Can I ask a quick question? Why is their only 8 reviews on this story, instead of 8 TRILLION! This was really good. GREAT! It's only the 2nd chapter, and already I'm hooked to it. There's so many things that I love in each chapter that it's just nuts.

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First off, in both chapters, you're so descriptive. You seem to have a knack for being one of the most descriptive writers I've ever known. This is great. I mean, I thought Legacy Of Thieves was good, but this just takes the cake.

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First off, the Carmelita death thing, or should I say, FAKE DEATH THING, was really well played out, and I loved the reason you played in for it. Hehehe. And Sly's reaction was sad too, showing how much that he did love her. But, do I sense a conspiracy here?

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And, what's with this fuck face Agent Mortis? I mean, seriously, I have a feeling that he'll end up being one of the main antagonists of the story. I mean, what an assholish creep! If he were in real life, I swear to god! Anyways, he makes for a great villain though.
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