Reviews for When Everything Is Wrong, We Move Along
ZenyZootSuit chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Aww! That was great! I love stories involving wings. Great job!
OMGepiccc chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
:O.

seriously? omg.

that

was

...

OMG !

so

emotional D:

so gooood though !

epicc (:

-jane
SparklyLalala chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
:pats your hand: I know, that episode undid us all :glares at kripke:

I like the attention and tenderness between them...and promises dean makes for both of them...cas is right, they have already changed that future...
killing u with umbrellas chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
loved it.
Darkqueenkat chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
I am pregnant and you are killing me here at work today. Maybe I should pay more attention to /angst in the category. That was beautiful. "you're a hunter, arent you?" I lost it then and just burst out in tears again today.
Pandora de Romanus chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Honey, it was AWSOME apocalipse angst... I was looking for something like this for sometime now... It was special. Thanks for writting.
Melissa Brite chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
love it.
stilljustceci chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
The apocalypse, it is apocalyptic. But this was hot. Really, really hot. WHEW. I just love needy Castiel and protective, comforting, alpha-male Dean.

This line really got me: "Suddenly, Cas’ arms were around him, vise tight, his head buried against Dean’s neck." So raw. The hickeys/lovebites story? So damn sexy. And that Cas could have healed his hand but didn't? Gah. Heartfail.

Couple of little constructive criticisms, since this is freshly posted:

Unintentional(?) repetition here: "Lust sparked hot in his groin at the sight and Dean moaned a little at the sight,"

and

everywhere you use the possessive "Cas'" it should be "Cas's" (even though I know that looks weird.)
AnyBalladWillDo chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
OMG, APOCOLYPSE ANGST

That was so wonderfully written. Underneath all the smut and angel porn, it was actually a beautiful story, and it showed the fears that the two of them have. GAH, I love it, and I love your one shots, and I love YOu...

B