Reviews for Serendipity
kurosakiami01 chapter 7 . 8/23
This is good. Though I feel really conficted and aggravated but understanding at the same time of Harry's situation and his infidelity. I just - I believe he should dedicate some time to himself and think about all the things he's been supressing since he met Squalo, and decide. Because it's not fair. Because it's hurting him even more than it's hurting the other parties in this, even if he doesn't want to realize it.

Anyway yes, the chapter was really enjoyable. It's a shame this hasn't been updated in so long, but. I'm grateful for what I could read of this. Even if the ending was cliffhanger-ish. Damn.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing! :D
DragonHeartXD chapter 7 . 8/5
...I'm crying...its over
Guest chapter 7 . 7/24
This is so good! I hope you are well and still interested in this story :) I love the dynamic between Harry and squalo, and I haven't seen something like this ever! Keep up the good work!
Amarante96 chapter 7 . 5/30
Please please please continue this story! I really want to see Harry break up with Ginny cause damn it all anyone who read this fic can see that he is happier with Squalo...

Not to hate on Gin or anything but he's just grown and changed too much after the war and life in general... they arent the same people that they were at 16 and for the current Harry, she just isnt enough... or rather he's outgrown their relationship and it's sad to see him trying to hold onto it even though all the readers can see that he's only holding on to it for stability and familiarity sake - nothing more.

I can totally understand Harry's emotions in the fic (tho I'll always be uncomfortable with cheating) and I hope to see a resolution to this soon!

Keep it up!
mccm chapter 7 . 4/28
Your story is AMAZING. (And amazing is not enough to describe it, but well, that's my limited knowledge of vocabuary rearing its head... ;)

I stumbled across your story a while ago, and was glued to it since the first chapter. I come back here everytime I want to feel the struggle that your Harry's complicated relationship with Ginny and Squalo has to offer. Everything in this story is so realistic (well, if you dont count the magic and mafia parts...hehe) that I could fully relate to what the charecter might feel and think, it's so REAL (for the lack of better word.)

I'm hoping you'll update soon. I'll forever looking forward to the next update. :)
DenizenD chapter 7 . 4/18
Pleeeeease finish this it's amazing
Beth9891 chapter 4 . 1/1
Love how you portrayed Ron!
Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 7 . 12/5/2015
Time Lady Tinkerbell chapter 7 . 12/3/2015
This story is so amazing! I absolutely love the way that Harry and Squalo interact with each other. And I really hope that you'll update soon!
asteria.ortygia chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
This is a beautifully done story, though I can't wait for Harry to tell the truth to Ginny and start getting serious with Squalo. I really hope you will update soon because it will be really hard to wait long!
Evani chapter 7 . 10/27/2015
This is beautiful, and I adore it. Thank you so much for writing this, I sooooo can't wait for an update
Bloody Kit XIII chapter 7 . 10/25/2015
Please please get Harry to end thing with Ginny really really soon please and maybe get Harry to resign as well so he can start to work closer with Squalo but still keep in touch with his friends and family and maybe have him unlock his soul flames but really all this is just my ideas for you so you can update sooner please
Fictional-Nympho chapter 7 . 7/24/2015
URRRK! I feel like my ovaries have exploded way too many times during this fic ** So well written and perfect characterisation, loving the plot developement so far xxxxxxxx
Trance20666 chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
I really love this.
I have not read any with this pairing.
A little sad though that their is no graphic sex.
But it's ok.
NemesisNecrosis chapter 7 . 3/13/2015
I really like the way you've built the characters in this story. I find a lot of stories with infidelity can't resist the whole, 'he's cheating because he's not happy' thing, but this actually seems to give an accurate example where that isn't the case. I'm kind of sad that it looks like you won't be updating this, because the mix of KHR/HP you have here is really interesting, especially the WAY you've mixed them. I'm a bit curious about whether you might have eventually mentioned Blaise Zabini, though, considering he was Italian, yet magical in the same way HP characters are. Maybe his father (most likely his mother's first husband) was a mafioso?
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