|Reviews for EO challenge: tense|
| darkorangecat chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
This was great! I enjoyed how little Dean was so hyper aware of his little brother even while half asleep. I also really enjoyed this sentence: "He would never forget the smile that Dean gave, as he hugged him close and placed Sam on his chest."
You have captured the family dynamic quite well in this drabble. It was an enjoyable read.
| Micaiah chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
I love John being a good daddy! So sweet.
| DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
It's a sweet image hun. Bev x
| Tribble Master chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
Love it! That's super cute. _ Write on!
| Noninone chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
Hell yes to the fluff!
| Scare4irony chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
| sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
Aw, too sweet! Loved the scene of John laying down with his boys and pulling Dean close while lifting a sleeping Sammy onto his chest.