Excellent story. I know it's been years, but I hope you update this!

This story hits different in 2020. Would love to see it updated.

I looooooooove this story ! You can never really know what will happen... And yet most of the events are so logical that you could have predict them. It's wrenching my heart !

It's kind of ironic, discovering this beautiful and so impressive story in time of quarantine from pandemia !

Woaaaaaa ! This story is amazing and it rings so true !

please update. This is too good my guy.

I don't know whether you even use this site anymore, but I felt the need to review just to say that rarely have I encountered such developed original characters, and I really appreciate the work that you've done. I especially love how unapologetically tough you've written Meviahd. I know it's a long shot, but I hope you return to publishing some day-even if it's not this story. I'm just returning to after a decade-long absence, so believe me, it can be done! :)

It has been a long and tiresome journey for the Jandali and Meviahd, now we're still a few waiting for another update.
This story has captivated me more than any other story, and I try to imagine an ending that isn't a tragic one. Hopefully, if you're still going to continue the story of this unfortunate pair, it will happen in near future.

Where do I begin, before first begging you to update, even after all this time?

This story is an inspiration. It gave me the kick in the ass I needed to write my own story, and that was only the first time I read it. This third reading, I have to put my thoughts into words for you.

The Jandali is a masterpiece. Too often do characters in the Warcraft world become caricatures, and Jandali is delectably refreshing.

pardon my use of the word humanity to describe an elf, but Meviahd's humanity makes her so relatable. Her struggles are so tenderly handled and I find myself always hungry to hear more of what happens to her.

I beg you to update again. I know it's selfish, but closure of this story would make me infinitely grateful.

Thank you for bringing this piece of art to life.

-Syrasha

This is such a well written story. I've just recently created a profile but I've followed this story for years. I hope you decide to update it!

I am truly happy to have found this story swimming around in a list of someone's Favorites the other day. The characters are so well-written, the plot is endlessly interesting, and the writing itself leaves nothing to be desired.

It is inspiring that you were able to create two wholly dynamic characters, and that you were able to portray their weaknesses without making them weak, and that you were able to play on their strengths without making them overly powerful. I feel as though I could meet both of these people in the real world *and* like them.

Thank you for this wonderful read. I hope you are able to and willing to update soon!

I really loved this story.. i can imagine the characters so well in my head. You are one of the best writers ive seen here... I really really hope you continue this. If not, i will be sad. I already miss jandali and meviahd :D

I cannot guess where you are going with this story, but I'll always be eager to read more if you continue it. I really like your characters, I can paint them vividly in my head. I hope that you continue to be inspired!

Oh man, this was a great chapter on so many levels, I really enjoyed this one.

Jesus...that sounds like a terrible disease.