|Reviews for Salvation in the Devil's Triangle|
| imnotraven16 chapter 10 . 10/29/2014
| Booker10 chapter 10 . 5/28/2014
Love this!:D please update soon!:)
| xxdarkxxalicexx chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
So basically, what took the Marauders years a probably a lot of verifiable books to accomplish took Harry... a month or less... with a deranged man who'd spent 11, almost 12 years in Azkaban taking the full brunt of the Dementors because he only worked out the animagus trick a few weeks into Harry's stay in Azkaban and therefore had plenty of time to be driven insane and lose the fond memories of his time practicing becoming an animagus with his friends. Fudge liked Harry before he started declaring Voldemort back, so why would he send Harry to Azkaban at all, especially after saving Ginny? I can understand why Dumbledore would tell Harry the truth about his scar since it was gone now and no longer affected him, but why tell him about the prophesy and horcruxes? If the prophesy was still in effect, wouldn't it be better to tell Harry when he's old enough to know the full weight of it and be able to keep it a secret? Why tell Harry about the horcruxes if he could find and destroy them on his own? I don't see any point in Dumbledore telling Harry what he wouldn't a year ago other than to scare him away, which, by the looks of it, wasn't Dumbledore's goal. What was a mirror doing sitting in a hospital room? Why would Harry change back after being attacked by dementors? Your whole timeline kinda throws me off. Basically, Harry is thrown in Azkaban. Week 1: Sirius gains enough energy to look through the bars of his cell at Harry. Week 1, Day 4: Sirius finally talks to Harry. Week 4: Sirius discovers changing into his animagus form dulls the effects dementors have on him and begins teaching Harry. Week 5, Day 5: Harry transforms into his animagus form for the first time. Week 6: Harry reaches "Clarity" and Sirius begins planning their escape. Week 6, day 3: Sirius completes their escape plan and they put it in action. Week 7: Harry wakes up in the hospital. Harry seems a bit too grown up in this. What 12-year-old thinks about exercising when he's constantly around dementors after being betrayed by his friends and while working on his animagus form? Why did the dementors focus on Sirius instead of Harry when they made their escape? Why did no one question why Harry was outside his cell in the first place?
A week later Sirius looks at him through the cell doors. A few days later Sirius talks to him. At least three weeks later Sirius discovers how to dull the effects of dementors. A week (a week and a half at most) later Harry mastered his animagus form through hours of meditating and practicing to first find his three forms then gradually transfigure more and more of himself as he got better at it. At least a few days later Sirius finished their escape plan and they got out of Azkaban where Harry was caught by dementors and passed out. It'd take him at least a day, maybe an entire week to regain consciousness since having part of a soul sucked out of him would throw his body off quite a bit, not to mention the fall he took.
| geetac chapter 10 . 12/13/2013
I enjoyed reading the chapters very much and want more of the story.
| ibterismith50 chapter 10 . 8/1/2013
Hope you plan to write more. Thanks
| Sirin Black chapter 10 . 7/20/2013
i really like this story, i hope you continue it!
| Kai Chen chapter 10 . 2/9/2013
| nobody chapter 10 . 10/2/2012
cool story but i think you should keep going
| awdrggrdwa10236 chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
hey i think its a good chapter but i dont understand the animagus forms and haow many he has
plz continue the good work
| monbade chapter 10 . 6/19/2012
Good story, i hope you update want to see if Harry's name comes out of the goblet while he attends his new school and what it portrays to the story.
| 917brat chapter 10 . 2/7/2012
this is seriously a brillint story and I can't wait to see just what you are going to have happen next so please keep this up and update it again real soon.
| gategirl15747 chapter 10 . 11/25/2011
| scara1 chapter 10 . 11/11/2011
your disclaimer was funny, and i really like your story line, just on critisism, you need to desperatly proof read or get a beta.
| fireboltfx chapter 10 . 10/30/2011
This is very good, i hope you have had permission from miranda flairgold to use their ideas, but if you do it is a brilliant fic.
| Ella1331 chapter 10 . 9/28/2011
I was really sorry to see such a good story end so quickly!