Reviews for Life after Death
Nosferatu2255 chapter 4 . 4/5
Here's a fucking review, good story but if you don't stop with the pointless and annoying authors notes you will have less and less people wanting to read and/or review the story me included.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/19/2016
Guest chapter 9 . 6/26/2015
I's wants a sequels
Guest chapter 9 . 4/10/2015
Would have liked to see children
Dragon don't eat me chapter 8 . 6/8/2014
Taunting me with virtual food... Only second to actual food
CinnimonToastKatie chapter 10 . 1/17/2014
Dude, you just killed my buzz. I loved this story now it's dead. You killed it. How could you.
Guest chapter 10 . 12/17/2013
Where is the Rest !it should go on for longer
What about eragon and aryas Kid ( little
Do more!
picton4 chapter 10 . 12/4/2013
give me cookies
picton4 chapter 6 . 12/4/2013
isn't he called king killer?
picton4 chapter 2 . 12/4/2013
half brother
Ninja Cats and Rainbows chapter 10 . 9/18/2013
Thanks for the great story, there were some spelling errors, but the plot was good.
mr rophone chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
Eragon and murtagh are actually half brothers (they share a parent -selena- but step bros/sis' have no blood connection but their parents are together), but it was still a good chapter.
Asassin26 chapter 6 . 1/28/2013
Joda-Eragonsson chapter 10 . 7/27/2012
wooow you left out so much loose ends in this story loool
it's good don't get me wrong I liked the ExA aspects but so many things need to be answered
but where is the green egg?
what happens to the rest of the cities that the Varden haven't captured?
where was Roran's cornation?
what happened to the elves, dwarves they were pratically none existant?
how on earth did the varden defeat 70000 troops without the help of Eragon when he was battling Galby?
what was islandazi opinions on eragon and arya's relationship?
I don't understand why you choose to mention Eldurnari but they played no part in the story whatsoever, you still have 100s of them in Galby's palace?
Nasuada just disappeared out of the story after the conversation on who would be king wtf?
HOW ON EARTH DID MURTAGH AND THORN DIE FROM BEING PUT TO SLEEP? you could have at least made that scene more exciting, you built up the tension by having them arrive with enough troops to defeat the Varden yet destroyed it by such a soft death
and come on at latest give us some closure on whether they had kids or not
But yeah that's my two cents worth, I know for sure I'm not the only reader who wanted these questions asked. Like I said i found the story decent but I think it got majorily rushed
Kinzoku no Kami chapter 9 . 2/1/2012
I loved this story, it is how CP should have ended the Inheiritance cycle.
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