Reviews for The Deal
liljennmartin chapter 9 . 3/12/2014
Great writing...but a very disappointing definitely labeled it incorrectly.
SciFi43 chapter 9 . 12/12/2012
Why did you label this as Romance instead of Romance/Tragedy? Ron was better in this story but I was totally rooting for Sirius the whole way. For that matter why not categorize it as Hermione/Ron instead of Hermione/Sirius? I'm not a Ron hater, I just don't think the two go well together as she is too dominant for him. Even though you wrote him a bit OOC (more likeable), he still won't be able to stimulate her like she needs, IMHO.

Well written, but I didn't get the whole bit about Hermione feeling she 'deserved' to be loved? I thought she and Sirius were perfect together and have a lot more common intellectually than she and Ron. Also think Sirius would challenge her more so she could have pure fun when she goes nuts worrying about word and such.

Keep on writing as you have real talent but hope you label it more clearly. Honestly, I wouldn't have read it had I known she ended up with Ron.
Shelby chapter 9 . 9/21/2012
It's really well written, and I really do like it a lot. I just have a hard time seeing the Ron from the books/movies actually being anywhere near that understanding or knowledgeable. The whole "emotional range of a teaspoon" thing and how rude he's been to Hermione throughout the books about their relationship doesn't exactly fit in with the selfless, adorable Ron in the story. But that's the writer's call. Anyways, good story so far :)
severusforever chapter 9 . 8/1/2012
Only just came across this story, but so glad I did. I assumed that this would just be more plotless Sirius/Hermione smut but how wrong I was! It broke my heart that Ron won in the end but I think it worked well, in a bitter-sweet way. I can't think of a bad word to say about the story, your characterisation, writing and the storyline was genius as well as the perfect dose of humor when needed but not to much to take away from the realism. Sorry, I'm rambling now, but not many fics manage to reduce me to tears! Definately adding to favourites :)
PomBear007 chapter 9 . 6/17/2012
Omg I loved this fic. It made me laugh and it made me cry :) I'm not normally a fan of Ron and Hermione but I thought he was so cute in this fic .

Pom Xx
CrashBandicootIsMyIdol chapter 6 . 1/10/2012
You're a Kiwi too! Yaaay! That makes me happy :D haha when you mentioned the Steiny I thought you might have been, but I wasn't too sure, until you actually said it lol. Brilliant story, by the way. Typical Ron, gets better in bed as soon as Hermione starts having an affair. Tsk tsk.
fullofwish chapter 9 . 9/18/2011
Great story! I would have chosen Sirius, but I think it was nice for her and Ron to have a happily ever after. It is great to read fanfiction from other NZ HP fans! I am in Auckland too, studying at UoA. I've added you to my favourite authors and am going to read the rest of your stories :) Cheers!
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 9 . 9/14/2011
Wicked, I Loved This Story, Fantastic Job. xxx
hallefaye chapter 8 . 7/17/2011
You've been gone for over a year, that criminal! Beautiful, please continue. I am begging you to continue this lovely story!
galnkay chapter 8 . 8/1/2010
If ron gets her I will never read anything of yours again :)

update soon!

driver picks the music chapter 8 . 6/6/2010
Great update!
i luv hardy chapter 8 . 5/25/2010
omg i love this! I want hermione 2 end up wit sirius :D i m bad lol.

keep up the awesome work :D
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 8 . 5/18/2010
sweet-tang-honney chapter 8 . 5/18/2010
great chapter.
sweet-tang-honney chapter 7 . 3/4/2010
awesome chapter.
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