|Reviews for Vanguard Marine|
| Cuhain chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Pretty good :D. An excellent short read.
Not much to crit, really, since there's not much I would change. Well done there! And sorry for not being very constructive.
Perhaps you could try adding just a bit more description, sounds and smells as they drop, what the Tau craft looks like (and how your character feels about the horrifically heretical xenos technology), and stuff like that.