Reviews for Vanguard Marine
Cuhain chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Pretty good :D. An excellent short read.

Not much to crit, really, since there's not much I would change. Well done there! And sorry for not being very constructive.

Perhaps you could try adding just a bit more description, sounds and smells as they drop, what the Tau craft looks like (and how your character feels about the horrifically heretical xenos technology), and stuff like that.

Keep writng!