|Reviews for The Shy and the Oblivious|
| TangerSoto chapter 5 . 11/18/2013
Thank you, thank you for nice beginning)
All Thieves Turn and Turn Again
| BelleBiter chapter 5 . 9/22/2013
This is a truly lovely little story. I'm on board any time you feel you can get back to it.
| Marion chapter 5 . 8/1/2013
Oh I HOPE you'll continue this story! the way you portrayed edward in this one is just so touching and sweet!
| Saguenay chapter 5 . 6/28/2013
Noooo, you can't leave us here wondering about how this Edward succeeded to get Bella to go out with him. You need to write one more chapter to show us Edward gathering up his courage and telling Bella about his true feelings and then Bella jumps in his arms and kisses him silly.
If you write a new chapter I'll tell you all the favourite songs of my life.
| Saguenay chapter 2 . 6/28/2013
How long was the longest bus ride you've ever been on?
In 2000 my husband and I went to New York with a group of his co-workers. We got in the bus at 7 pm and arrived in New York at 9 am. That would be 14 hours. It was a wonderful trip to see the Urban Jungle that is New York.
| ThatCurlygirl chapter 5 . 11/10/2012
haha I totally agree with your opinion on the word Awkward! and are you ever going to update this story? just curious :)
| GinervaMarieChaseEverdeen chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
Liking the story. Bella and Edward need to realize they like each other. Update soon plz!
| Nethead97 chapter 5 . 3/5/2011
Oh what little they both know about what the other is feeling or thinking ... that can be quite common when best friends feel more then just friends for each other. Jealous and hurt can put more of a strain on a friendship such as this when the communication isn't there on these feelings. I've recently learned that even if the feeling isn't mutual between best friends of the opposite sex it is sometimes better to know how one feels about the other to better understand certain mood swings of anger, jealousy and distancing. However, I've also experienced first hand how expressing such feelings can destroy the friendship. Truthfully I think age has a lot to do with how the information is processed and dealt with. Looking forward to the next chapter!
| ilck chapter 5 . 12/3/2010
Lol awkward IS an awkward word!
I love your story so far!
| Zhee chapter 5 . 11/12/2010
This goes to show how easy we can misunderstand somebody, even someone whom we thought we really know! I wish Edward is more confident of himself and tells Bella how he feels... which is a hard task to do, even for a person whose self confidence is not destroyed by stuttering problem in the first place. I feel sad for them though! And James... just the name promises... trouble!
Now I really love listening to Linkin Park's Waiting For The End, and any hits from One Republic.
| Zhee chapter 4 . 11/10/2010
I wonder who will make the first move. Obviously they love each other! Maybe Alice will help?
My favorite English word is 'baby' in whatever context or meaning! My other fav word is 'scrumptious'... yum!
| Zhee chapter 3 . 11/10/2010
13 hours! I'm sure your bottom will be numb by the end of it. I wish I was more adventurous... I don't ever sleep on anything weird, just plain old bed, and the most extreme being the cold tiled floor.
Eric deserve a slap... or four!
| Zhee chapter 2 . 11/10/2010
My longest bus ride... up to 4 hours, back in college time. Strictly daylight rides, after a bad and quite gross experience with a night one.
Edward stutters badly... I feel sorry for him because it limits him socially. Well, I hope he will grow out of this! Nevertheless, Bella loves him just fine, stuttering or not.
| Zhee chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
The catchy title just got to me! Sometimes I stutter a little when I'm very nervous, and the fact that it is something that we can't control (most of the time anyway) really can frustrate and irritate you. I just have to say... Edward is a cute stutter!
| HeartBreaker1023 chapter 5 . 8/21/2010
wow i really like this story and really want to know what happens next:) plz update!