Reviews for Window
Rainbor123 chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
That was sweet :) I approve :P
Jacob and Leah forever chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
I love this! please add another chapter to this!
JacobFan chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
cute
howardgirl17 chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
This story is a good start can you keep writting I really want to see it take off. PLEASE! I really liked it.

Thanks

Please
em chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
awesome! please do another chapter!
laurazuleta18 chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Cute!

I really liked it...
nanana chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
u did so will this was hilariuos u got the personalities down great job i can go to sleep happy
mikaeleylee chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
so cute :D Update the guide soon ;) im obessesed
TheVividTruth chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
paused to consider this. Who did I actually like? Let’s see, certainly not anyone from the pack, or school, or- “God, that’s gross, Jake. I mean, she’s my mother for crying out loud. This is-” I felt about to be sick. I mean, just the idea of Jake and Mom, I mean… oh god, oh god, I-

You must continue sweet aadarshinah:D

So update soon:D
Kei Jones chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
He didn’t seem to care. “Guess what.”

“I don’t care how many licks it takes to get to the centre of a tootsie pop. It’s not my night to patrol; ergo, I don’t have to be bothered by furry balls of testosterone. Go bother someone else.” - My average is 142 - But I really don't like tootsie pops and just stop there.

“Can’t you go bother someone who cares?”

With a dismissive wave, he tells me, “Seth’s asleep.”

“And I wasn’t?” I point out the logical flaw in his argument.

“Your window was open.”

“Not an open invite for boys with fleas to invade my house.”

“I don’t have fleas.”

“Sure you don’t, Balto.”

“Balto was only half-wolf.”

“Have you been watching Disney movies with Quil and Claire again?”

“No – well, ye – but that’s not the point.” - I justlove your Jake/Leah banter.

Who did I actually like? Let’s see, certainly not anyone from the pack, or school, or- “God, that’s gross, Jake. I mean, she’s my mother for crying out loud. This is-” I felt about to be sick. I mean, just the idea of Jake and Mom, I mean… oh god, oh god, I- - roflmao. Ew, Jake and Sue? That's just not right. Who wants Jake as a step daddy? I'd much rather...never mind. -.- Hehehee.

A smile crept onto my face of its own accord. Chocolate…

Maybe I would.

It was chocolate, after all. - that is so true Leah. How can you NOT believe someone that offers you chocolate? oO? Good thing some creepy guy in a trenchcoat never offered me chocolate. No telling where'd I'd wind up. Then again I'm pretty good about accepting drinks from strangers. But chocolate is chocolate and tequila/vodka/grey goose and gin are my best liquid buddies...hmm.

Poit is I loved the story and you're really taking Luci's challenge seriously. Maybe I need to get cracking too. BLACKWATER FOREVER!
Fixxed.Easily chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
omg!

i love it!

more!

give us more! yay! hehehe
Running with the wolves chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
Why did you make this a one shot? It SO good...
Luci-Marlena chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
*you* owe *me* a mini fridge. a *kenmore* mini fridge, not the other way around.

I scowled in return, offering him Death Glare #47 (patent pending).- lmao patent pending... and the fact taht she has them numbered. probably categorizes them into groups, ie family, family events, every day glare...

“Can’t you go bother someone who cares?”

With a dismissive wave, he tells me, “Seth’s asleep.”- ha! haha! too cute

I paused to consider this. Who did I actually like? Let’s see, certainly not anyone from the pack, or school, or- “God, that’s gross, Jake. I mean, she’s my mother for crying out loud. This is-” I felt about to be sick. I mean, just the idea of Jake and Mom, I mean… oh god, oh god, I-oh gross. that's just sick and wrong. funny as hell, but wrong.

very nice. i will NOT give you a mini fridge, but maybe, *maybe* a postie will be sent in return... maybe.

luci
Ginaaaa chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
I liked this a lot, great job.
LM3795 chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
hahahahaha...m chocolate...m...*homer simpson glazed look*..m...heeheehee...I liked this, it was pretty damn cute!
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