|Reviews for A New Beginning|
| Debbie Hicks chapter 17 . 5/30
Bitten/changed/drained of blood
then OW! Then bitten my best friends wITH ALL OF THEM blacked out wITHOUT BLOOD With their blood wI drained tHEN wITH MY DEATH AND HIS WITH EACH THREE THIS ONES WHO Turned you Felix rid of them drain theitr more blood they had doed good EXECUTERED witgh each biitten kids ripped us were as all of them then the Cullens werre next BLAZING US/THEM Together into death then torn from here freed of Werewolf/Vampire bodies then brought them here reported she was drained by snakes with these are drained from here are deceaed good rip them guards alive rid of them at Once these Lycans smell like atomic waste then it came too late the blood was removed then myself heal faster so they recovered much faster rate had aged to look at 21 but was frozen at 18 or 19 then so they had died with myself had been reborn by Queen Serenity and Lord Thanatos god of death resurrected us infected with venom ended up with shorter hair had total Anmesia was cursed but bitten but infected Oh my god her hair grew back with a mid-longer wave myself did not die but was infected wearing from NASA My Movie styled suit looks from the Matrix ALICE! She woke upwith him they then suddenly blacking outside popped freely snapped then suddenly brought here they been turned illgeally sentenced them to death then killed them weith the bodies of ourselves then it was too late murdered caused me to avenge against the Vampires was possessed by Bellona my host so his with their own Alice they are not humans myself finally spoken these words Alice they murdered me now I Have more enhanced strength and superspeed and grace and beauty and poise and elegance and increat healing factor and Immortality and Longevity iI Will Asassinate the Volturi it was myself within the host oh my god who are you I Am a Vampire slaying/Werewolf assassin then it was too late reborn as some else brand spank new right here Alice what is she she was bitten with them now trained more harder then hunted as all in both forms ate as all of them left bones to fiftty states left young orphaned with around the world suddenly blown apart were poisoned with botgh shatteerd freely now unable to attend school blasting freely nuked without bodies taken from here deceased then brought them here then too late murdered then existed for more than 229 years later looked well haven't age was the same ole girl-wolf was now in my one hundred and fifty-five year old young-looking body of a eighten or nineteen year old woman blown freely snapped then lost senses then from here aged with them then brought here dead then suddenly rid both then myself had no air had blood trapped but shattered everthing;s changed with all but popped freely but it happened brought here no more blood at all nuked guards as all of them he tested onto us survived the attack were Immortal oh my god you can't have kids yes then it was too late the blood made us a lot more Athletic then was hungry then written formal but more ceremonial word wee were on a strict Milltary diet gone MACOS On them then were so more ton ed BURP! Excuse us we need a diet then blacked outside then it came too late they brought bodies here reported she is deceaed but is undead by the shifter code is a Galactic Lycan rid of them they are drained from our guards then suddenly nuked the bodies in wolf forms rid as coats and purses then news we were still existing kicking Negaverse butt never died out were stStarfleet Marine strong that the young wolves were cadets then aged to adulthood then were a much stronger pack-covebn forced to fight it was too late the parents were in their eightiesor more.
| RavenCullen2014 chapter 17 . 3/31/2015
| Reinonmyday chapter 17 . 3/13/2015
Hey! Did you forget about this story? It's really good! I like Bella as a wolf better than a vamp
| Guest chapter 17 . 10/31/2014
keep writing plz
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/21/2014
Well it's a good thing you never abandon your stories (chah, right). So many unanswered questions in this story. It's actually a really good concept.
| LuckyStar0489 chapter 17 . 8/4/2013
Are you ever going to finish this story? I really like it! :(
| LuckyStar0489 chapter 3 . 8/3/2013
This is so far a very interesting story!
| Vampiredamonstefan chapter 17 . 7/1/2013
Plz dont stop ;,(
| AussieGirl16 chapter 17 . 3/26/2013
love it please update soon
| daggeredheart15 chapter 17 . 2/21/2013
Please write more! I am dying to see what happens! :)
| Sonicthehedgewolf chapter 17 . 3/31/2012
What happens next
| shadow girls 100 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
The whole store was really good. i had fun reading it and i hope that you finish it or add on to it.
| How-to-smile-101 chapter 17 . 10/23/2011
Awesome! Totally AWESOME!
| beckylovestwilight chapter 17 . 7/29/2011
ohhh cant wait for the next chapter xxxx i hope Bella and Jake imprint on each other xxx
| Xyloto chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
I LOVE IT!