Reviews for The Lightning Alchemist
Guest chapter 6 . 7/17/2014
i love it please write more! I really love your story so PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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Guest chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
I liked the entry of scar and about the story of kyuubi and the god of Ishvalan
Guest chapter 2 . 7/17/2014
love it!
this is one of my fav stories!
Echo the Slowpoke chapter 7 . 10/27/2013
GET BACK TO TYPING THIS STORY PLEASE!
gust chapter 7 . 8/3/2013
Omg a coool story yo update soon
Guest chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
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lunarmidnightwolf chapter 7 . 3/7/2013
please continue
Trying -Helps chapter 2 . 3/2/2013
It wasn't a bad start, the writing was okay though it could do with some editing. I would just say not to rush the story.
Take the good person test.
King of Epic Chaos chapter 7 . 3/1/2013
update faster you author,or the mysterious me will not read maybe
ramen-luver101 chapter 7 . 12/30/2012
naruto no and who was looking for him?
Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 7 . 12/21/2012
yay! I loved it! please keep writting cause i would very much like to know whats going to happen next in the story.
Thorndsword chapter 6 . 8/30/2012
I hate this. What use is this for enjoyment if naruto is going to hide like a bitch? Also, I refuse to read a story where naruto is stupid, which is the case here.
Guest chapter 7 . 5/5/2012
He should have lightning armor or have faster reflexes
FireLark chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
this is good! please update!
xbamsod chapter 7 . 12/8/2011
Lol how is Naruto gonna get out of this one? It seems like someone is probably gonna have to go in and get him out though they will probably figure out that he knows how to do alchemy too. Update Soon _
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