Reviews for A Closer Eye
sirensbane chapter 1 . 7/29/2015
I cracked up at the line "Elizabeth is almost as pretty as I am." Neal is quite pretty, isn't he?
IOTR chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Aww this is cute so far. I loved the bit about being an office spouse. :)
patbor chapter 5 . 9/19/2011
Great little story! I love Neal and Peter. They don't have to be slash for me to read in all the smarm. I would love to read more in this story line. Grins.
jessytemple chapter 5 . 1/18/2011
omg it ended? this was AMAZING! perfect perfect perfect. every single detail! the progression was just right )

do we have a sequel? well more like a never ending fic would be great ;)
RainyJ.T chapter 5 . 9/14/2010
I am truly astounded by how well you keep them all in character! This was so perfect and believable, I honestly don't know how you do it. I love this story so much, and I am very glad that you wrote it!
Shadow Cat17 chapter 5 . 8/15/2010
Loved this story!
Naomi Hansen chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
"Why on earth did the kid look as if he had just taken his puppy away?"


Neal? Oh my god! Poor guy! I'm sorry Peter made you feel that way...

Well, that was short.

Auf Wiedersehen!

-Naomi Hansen
Karfinwen chapter 5 . 2/25/2010
Your Neal is SO Neal. This was a really cute story.
Elrhiarhodan chapter 5 . 2/23/2010
A bit late to the game on this one, but you've really nailed it, especially so early in the series. I can definitely see this in an episode.
MarbleGlove chapter 5 . 2/1/2010
This is such a wonderful story! As beautiful and flirty as Neal is, he's still really immature in some ways. And Peter makes a wonderful Dad. Strict, fair, and sympathetic. Fabulous.
MarbleGlove chapter 3 . 2/1/2010
This whole story is wonderful, but I had to pause to review this particular chapter because I love Mozzie so much in it. Neal is trying to find someone on his side and for once Moz agrees with Peter. Neal's reaction makes me laugh.
InvisibleSpork chapter 5 . 1/8/2010
Oh, I really enjoyed that. And Neal finally finding the limits of Peter's comfort zone. And basically everything. Thank you for posting.
InvisibleSpork chapter 4 . 1/8/2010
“Satchmo and me?” Neal asked with raised eyebrows.

Peter nodded.

“Am I at least your favorite?”


InvisibleSpork chapter 3 . 1/8/2010
I love Mozzie siding with Peter on this! They both just want what's best for Neal.

Peter's angry, and the first thing out of Neal's mouth is what did I do. :)
InvisibleSpork chapter 2 . 1/8/2010
I love your take on how Neal's so caught up in the game that he never thought of who he was hurting. I also love how Neal and El have such similar tastes.

And Neal at least outranks the dog. I love that. :)
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