Reviews for The Immortal Curse
baldy911 chapter 14 . 5/25/2010
Wow you update fast I was expecting at lest a 2 day wait but bam there I was in my inbox but good job r u going to make a sequal or continue with this story
baldy911 chapter 13 . 5/24/2010
Omg you can not leave it at that that's so unfair plz update soon plz
baldy911 chapter 11 . 5/22/2010
Omg that's is an awesome story plz continue plz plz plz plz plz
AbCarter chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Interesting premise. Nice mystery for Martha to sink her teeth into.

Look out for random capitalisation (girl and hell don't need to have capitals). And try to avoid having multiple people speak in the same paragraph. Break for a new paragraph instead.