|Reviews for New Resolve|
| garuda001 chapter 6 . 5/6/2013
Please update it's really good
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/2/2013
Why are you not updating anymore?
I think this fict is nice
| Hey it's Fakety chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
sorry, i'm too lazy to log in.
Just wanted to tell you about something that's coming up. Next month, november, is National Novel Writing month. It's a challenge where, you try to write 50'000 words in one month, usually to try and write a novel. I tried it last year, but, only got to around 25000. It's... pretty difficult, but also pretty useful. You leave things like editing and worrying about quality to the winds, and just try to learn how to write a lot. good practice for getting past writers block. here's the site:
oh, and if you make an account, tell me your username, i'll track you down and see what your stories like.
Hope your getting along well. people are saying there's going to be alot of snow this winter. There better be, for their sakes.
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/6/2012
Hmm, this chapter about Pamela's backstory seems a bit off. According to the game, Pamela enrolled to academy when Bernard's grandpa is still young, so Ernentraud shouldn't be there. It was her mom who gave her teddy bear. I think that's it, I haven't played the game since years but I still have a clear memory about the story ;) Can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully it's Renee's flashback
| LinRef17 chapter 6 . 5/1/2012
Wow, that fantastic. I want to cried when I read How Pamela die. Good job. Oh, in Chapter 1 you made the Other Vayne appear. Isn't that so?
| Yami no Majou077 chapter 6 . 11/4/2011
I'm finish all your chapters in one time and i'm feel great!It is an amazing story and i like it very much!Hope you update soon!
| Kuroi Onee-san chapter 6 . 10/21/2011
FINALLY UPDATED AND I'M SORRY FOR SUCH A LATE REVIEW.
I've been read this ever since before the midterm test started, but I finally could say anything now.
Okay, ROXIS x NIKKI PART IS REALLY, REALLY FLUFFY SOMEHOW. Well, It was LOL for that Mimixis (sorry If I mispell it) and Roxis obsession to defeat Vayne, ah, great charateristic there~
Motherly Jess...ah, beautiful scene to me. As I think that Jess should be more professional in this kind of situation while Anna's over-imagination dominated her whole mind. Oh yes, I really wanna know Anna's resolution after collecting mushrooms~
And yeah, the most attractive and interesting part is the other half of Pamela's past. Whew. You potrayed it darkly, love this so much. Kinda remind me of Pamela's past on Atelier Iris: Eternal Mana games, but more cruel and sweet ones. Lucresia, huh? Nice name and nice separation character made! I kinda wonder though, that Karnap, I misunderstood him as Ernentraud's grandpa since Pamela ever said that she was seeing Bernard's grandpa when she was alive.
Oh-ho~ I smell Bernard x Ernentraud here? I think their torture study actually a great research XD
Okay, that's all for me. Sorry for the rant and keep writing!
| JesterLegacy chapter 6 . 10/13/2011
Woah...It's been a looong time since I read a chapter this long. Pamela's past was interesting (and touching)... I also like the conversation between Anna and Jess. Nice update there! I'll be waiting as usual for the next one :D
| Mental Vampire8 chapter 6 . 10/8/2011
Another great chapter you never cease to amaze me I love how you used Anna's overly active imagination and how Pamela died almost made me cry. But one thing is bothering me. I've just finished Atelier Iris 3 and I think there was a quest about Pamela wanting to know how she died and there was a grave at the botom of Grimoire Castle that I think belonged to Pamela and it said something about how she died but I dont remember much anymore and I'm too lazy to replay the entire game just to see what happened because I think that quest was near the end of the game.
Thanks for answering my question.
| Axel yamamoto chapter 6 . 10/8/2011
Bro! You finally update! Man, Pamela past is so touching, nice name btw. Oh and if you make new fic pm me and i will read and review! And this chapter making me wamt to write mana khemia croosover! Naruto past will be very unpredicteble, kekeke. Btw i wanna see a VayneAnna moment! And Vayne mana! Well goodluck and update soon!
| Spaghetti Soysauce chapter 6 . 10/7/2011
Too lazy to log in. xD Hooray for updates! I'll just stop reviewing for a few minutes...
Man this is good. The darkness of Pamela's history was made of scary and dark awesome, especially at the last part. And I just noticed at the end that Lucre and Sia's names combined was Lucresia. Cool. Lucre and Sia's characterization were good, too. What a pair of delinquents. xD
Poor trio. Nothing happened at the end, except for one dying. D'awww.
That's only a half of her history? Now that's one long past. Hooray for cameos of Bernard and Ernentraud!
Oh, silly Anna. Who says that your imagination may be bad for a relationship? Good thing Jess thinks otherwise. What a matchmaker. xD And her history gets told too? Now this story is going to be good. Does it involve those mushrooms? xD
Jess sounds like Anna's mother. Which is cute. She'll help Anna sort out her feelings, won't she? :)
Mimi's Motherhood Manual, LOLZ! Suits her perfectly. Her scenes with Roxis were amusing. Very. From the group, these two are the ones who haven't changed much. I think. xD
She subconsciously creates something awesome via hard work? Cool, so is Roxis. Where the heck does he keep that recipe book? And cool portable alchemy bag with barriers. And he has a glass wipe called Glass Gentle? LOLZ! These new items really keep my interest up. xD
Nice update all in all, buddy! Waiting for further chapters and character histories! Keep up the good work! :D
| Mental Vampire8 chapter 5 . 7/11/2011
This was really good I cant wait for the next also wondering where did you come up with all that stuff about Pamela?
| RandomGuy999 chapter 5 . 6/18/2011
This is sooooo great I can't wait for the next chapter.
| The Bystander who doesn't care chapter 5 . 6/13/2011
That was awesome. I really liked the analysis scene since I'm a sucker for emotional torques. Even though you haven't updated in a while it seems you have the intention to finish this so please do :).
| midnightcrescent98 chapter 5 . 6/5/2011
Nice story! I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the Anna/Vayne pairing, but I didn't expect the Roxis/Nikki. hahaha, oh well,
I'll be waiting for the nxt chapter :3