|Reviews for Murder in the White City|
| alleaf chapter 12 . 7/4
I love this! So suspenseful but fun! Please tell me you'll be updating this? :) If not, I hope you might at least reveal the culprit!
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 12 . 4/11
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 4/11
| Sanzoline chapter 3 . 4/10
You've gotta finish this sometime! It's so great!
| Alanic chapter 12 . 3/26
okay, you have had many years to think of an ending. Please don't leave everyone hanging. One more chapter should do it, shouldn't it?
| Alanic chapter 2 . 3/24
Another great chapter! Loved the argument about the chess pieces! I think Legolas has a point...
| Viola Blaire chapter 5 . 9/15/2016
Oh my God the killer is the sister in law! She killed the maid while her husband was out riding. And the brother kept throwing hints about disagreement between his brother and sister, to get suspension away. They want the money! They know about the baby
| dnll chapter 12 . 5/7/2016
I'm crying please you have to finish this. Not knowing who the murderer was is unbearable.
| RoboTitaness chapter 12 . 4/27/2016
Oh my god I just reread this. And Aldis. And Garrow. And blacksmith and wife and wet nurse. Oh my god I caught that now. Uppppddaaaaaaaate
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/16/2016
This was really good. I was really enjoying how the story unfolded.
| Horsegirl01 chapter 12 . 12/15/2015
Have you abandoned this story? I would love to read it through to completion... I was really enjoying it...
| Stormcutter684 chapter 12 . 10/17/2015
Oh! What a mystery! Who's doing it?! I must know! Saes! Update!
| Love it chapter 12 . 9/19/2015
This is one of my favorite stories. I love how you portray all the characters. There are enough plausible suspects that the murderer isn't obvious, but enough clues that I suspect the reveal will be justified.
| TolkienScribe chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
Don't mind me... I am just sitting in the corner, sniffing and waiting for this to update since 2013... it's okay... I know you found better things to write... no, I am not trying to guilt you into writing this or anything... :P
Come on! I am dying to know here!
| Sonicscrewdriversinmiddleearth chapter 12 . 8/2/2015