Again taking advantage of the situation.*gray* Dirty mind Lucy huh

Goddamn these guys love to take advantage of situations.*cough* gray, *cough* natsu

Awesome story

Hehehe...huh wonder how natsu will react...please continue is a real nice story I think it will be even better as it continues!

Hey good storyline but, its been 3 years since your last updated this story please please please finish it.

MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER!

I like you story and u should put stuff like put the names of who said it

haha, school is crazy~

not to put any pressure on you but..please get the next chapter out ! :D

this stuff is GREAT! xD

Interesting chapter. Glad you're still continuing(:

Now you're getting me all tensed up for the next chapter! Haha

I hope it will saty as N/L.

And do you need a beta reader? 'Cause I wouldn't mind helping

with your grammar.

Greetings!

I'll let you have the pleasure of having my first review.

You need very serious help with beta-reading, because your words repeat themselves, and although you may have a good storyline, it cannot be understood well because of your unimaginably horrifying grammar.

Please do not take these criticisms into heart as you can improve a lot with the help of a beta-reader.

Once you improve this, I will grant you as many positive reviews as you want with the help of my reputation in the beta-reading society.

Note that I do have my own account, but I have chosen to review anonymously.

I'm curious of what will happen to gray and lucy, If you can, can u update it? please? onegai?, porvavor? sige na?

aww how sad poor lucy :(

i cant wait to see how this turns out so...DONT DISAPPOINT ME! (plz :D)

o whoa poor lucy dang natsu is for sure to go on a ramage for who ever did this hope u continue

wow great story, i would probably try to make it a littl longer and there where some small parts that i had to read twice, like 'to her body half naked body' but i know what you where saying... yeah sorry i'm not really a critic so i'm not good at telling people what they need to fix, or telling them what i'd do. but it is a great story, oh and are there going tobe more chapters to it, cause i wanta read them .