Reviews for One Line: You Never Left
Nyxia chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Was a great story! But way to short! ;)

Good job Vashti! :D

Keep writing the way you do :)

* Sorry for my poor english... i'm a french canadian! :)*
maipigen chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Uh you have a way with words you know - it was really intense and descriptive, I could see it all in my mind.

And the whole internal thought process about Simone and when he last thought of her - I really think it was a great piece. Short as your work usually are, but really good.

I hope you're gonna continue to add on this.

Happy writing

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