Reviews for It's a Start
RunningOnCoffee chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
lol i liked this. he is so dumb, watch when he gets caught. cant wait to see what happens next! _
just-O chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Congrats, you didn't go overboard like i see a lot of people do. It was a nice story and I liked it. Nice job! _
J. Rosemary Moss chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Lovely job! 'The Portrait' just sort of screams for Peter to take Neal over his knee-even while I sympathize with Neal's motives. Thanks for bringing this 'missing scene' to life. :)
NaughtyAngelBrat chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
I've never even seen the show(though I have seen the previews and it did look interesting) and all I can say is Uh Oh! Looks like Neal really does want to try the full version. Can't wait for the next installment.

Hugs, Che'
Rangerskirt chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
heh this made me giggle quite a bit!Thanks for the laugh!
PH2W chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Talking was good. Talking meant no hitting, and Neal was all for no hitting.

Great line... love it!

Thought this was another SV story, but this certainly DID NOT disappoint:-)! From the ending I reckon Peter & Neal may end up having the full discussion very, very soon.
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