Reviews for It's a Start
RunningOnCoffee chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
lol i liked this. he is so dumb, watch when he gets caught. cant wait to see what happens next! _
just-O chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Congrats, you didn't go overboard like i see a lot of people do. It was a nice story and I liked it. Nice job! _
J. Rosemary Moss chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Lovely job! 'The Portrait' just sort of screams for Peter to take Neal over his knee-even while I sympathize with Neal's motives. Thanks for bringing this 'missing scene' to life. :)
NaughtyAngelBrat chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
I've never even seen the show(though I have seen the previews and it did look interesting) and all I can say is Uh Oh! Looks like Neal really does want to try the full version. Can't wait for the next installment.

Hugs, Che'
Rangerskirt chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
heh this made me giggle quite a bit!Thanks for the laugh!
PH2W chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Talking was good. Talking meant no hitting, and Neal was all for no hitting.

~Great line... love it!

Thought this was another SV story, but this certainly DID NOT disappoint:-)! From the ending I reckon Peter & Neal may end up having the full discussion very, very soon.
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