SHUDDDITT! HAHAHAHAHA

That's a very interesting idea, Hakuba going to Kaito for advice . I thought Hakuba was a ladie's man if he tried to act more charming but I guess Koizumi isn't one easily wooed is she?

The ending part...don't tell me Hakuba is really going to try and go for the noodle...?

Nevertheless, I'll wait for the next chapter !

XD very funny. :)

Love the disclaimer by the way. :)

Just one thing.

'The irk-haired' don't know if you want to, but just a small spelling mistake that you can fix. ;)

Ahahaha. The noodle trick is gross but super funny!

I love this so much! "Swear on the lamb chop" HAHA! So Kaito!

Haha Hakuba is too much of a gentleman.. I honestly thought he was going to spit the wine out like all over the place... too bad you made him spit into the cloth :P

That noodle trick is SO gross though haha

*adds you to favourite authors _*

xDD

...Oh my. *recovers from the giggles*

The crack! 'Tis lovely! And Kaito! And the lamb chop! *relapses into giggles*

Ooh, to be nitpicky for a moment, at the beginning, I think you meant "dark-haired", not "irk-haired"?

Anyway. This was a very funny story. The Olive likes. :3

*hits you with cookies*

Kaito. Spaghetti. I-I-I—hadn't laughed out loud like that in a long time. This was absolutely hilarious, oh god! Saguru! *loves both boys and is an absolute awe of Akako*

... 'Swear on the lamb chop.' /guffaws

Pf...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! xD

Kaito's so stupid and gross at the same time...*snickers* and Hakuba is actually following his advice? O.o poor guy...he must had been really desperate...lol

Great story...I needed the good laugh ;)

I really do so love your characterization of Kuroba. Although that was kinda mean of him XD For a change I actually feel sorry for Hakuba. Ha, ha.