|Reviews for He Was A Quiet Man|
| qweerlittlefish chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
This was so sad! This is so so so sad! But oh my gosh, it was so well written! You're so talented! This just pulled at the heartstrings, and made so much sense and seemed so real. I think I'm gonna stop being such a moody teenager now...
| InkWeaverabc chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
That was so depressing. Eru, Bella is such a bitch! Why am I doing this to myself?!
| random-k chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
| Xiaou Nem chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
This was moving. I like your Charlie. :-)
One small error: you use "I" in one place, "I wouldn't be able to cope" when you mean "he"
| Anonmyous999 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
This was such a heartening peace! It really does seem likely of Charlie to feel like this; I know I would if I went through those things.
| Daddy's Little Pyro chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
I feel this could actually be possible. This was so sad, and it brings Bella into a new light. I love how it puts some backstory on Charlie, because he's just an awesome character.
| KingKillerq chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
I'm on the verge of crying. Charlie, I wish that had never happened to you, a victim of fear and circumstance.
| That70sshowlova chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
That was so. Sad. God. Bella's a bitch.
| fanficreader2842 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
I don't remember the scene in the book when she gets the truck but in the movie she actually seems ...alive.
| Justanothersinger chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
You hear that? That's the sound of my heart shattering into a million tiny pieces. And my extremely-loud sobbing, complete with generous amounts of snot.
...Sorry if I grossed you out there. It's true; this fanfic actually left me in tears. Very few stories have actually done that and I...ahh, hell.
This story is filling in the gaps the original book had; showing Bella's character from another person's perspective...her father's. And his reaction here, it's what a normal human being would feel especially after the estrangement of his daughter, only to have her come back and let them see, with their own eyes, how much she'd come to loathe everything about them and the pieces of her life they represented.
But despite it all, he loves her as a father would love his daughter.
And your take on him watching as Edward takes Bella away from him, seperating them once again...I was already tearing up at that point, but the last line pushed me over the edge.
'He was a quiet man'
Argghhhh, my feels.
So all in all, this was a lovely story. Heartbreaking, but lovely.
Thanks for the read :)
| Rowena chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
I love this little look at Charlie - I feel so bad for him! Even worse is that it's not even a case of miscommnication - Bella really does hate Forks that much. :( Wonderful writing!
| cornfields chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Heart-breaking and beautiful. Read this a while back, but didn't comment. Never left my mind.
| YumiDoesTheMacarena chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
This is amazing and tragic.
Charlie always was my favorite character; I'm glad to see him given voice, no matter how quiet it may be.
| BackgroundRobot-11 chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Oh God, Charlie suffers so much because of that miserable little thing he calls a daughter and that whiny little leech. It's not fair at all.
Brilliant fic, I love Charlie's characterisation, you've done a much better job than SMeyer ever could.
| cocoalover1956 chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Charlie's too good a man to have Bella for a daughter.