Reviews for Magical Twilight
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 10 . 10/9/2014
I like it! **
AnetteRuby chapter 10 . 10/8/2014
some suggestions/ideas...use any that you like I ask for nothing in return:
-Harry starts showing subtle signs of momentary weakness...these episodes of his just show up and dissapear a few seconds after ...it's like fainting spells but with a longer lasting effect...
-or Harry's nerves are a bit frayed from the war...he could get phantom pains
-Luna visits Harry, she might have news of Hermione ...Jasper finds her behavior a bit familiar...figures she's a seer
-Harry hears Jacob's name also being Black...he could get sick or he could get curious if he's related to Sirius...or both in succession
-Harry starts wearing some kind of crystal as a charm...
-Bella enters the room while Harry is changing...she sees a scar or something
-Harry receives a dubious letter: "I know where you are..."
-Harry never had a chance to deal with his childhood...so he might get flashbacks ...like when breaking a plate, or when locked in tight spaces he gets claustrophobic...
-Harry gets a creature inheritance...
Anyway...enjoy creating
narutohinatalover4ev chapter 10 . 10/8/2014
love it! keep it up!
ripper34 chapter 10 . 10/7/2014
Good story
Elfin69 chapter 10 . 10/4/2014
oh uh, looks like Edward may try to make a reappearance and cause trouble. Hopefully Harry will not let him harm anyone, especially Bella and Jake. I am so glad that Jasper is happy again that he is falling for Harry.
Elfin69 chapter 7 . 10/4/2014
Well at least now Jasper knows who Blackie is and he is alright with Harry being able to shift. Will Harry tell Bella and Jake so that he does not get attacked in his other form?
Elfin69 chapter 6 . 10/4/2014
Wonder how Victoria will react when she runs into Harry and if she will be stupid and try to attack him.
Elfin69 chapter 5 . 10/4/2014
Looks like Jacob imprinted on Bella. Will they all sit down and explain?
Elfin69 chapter 4 . 10/4/2014
Looks like Harry is helping both Bella and Jasper in his own way to heal. Will he reveal himself to Jasper soon or will he wait?
Elfin69 chapter 3 . 10/4/2014
Will Mike try something again or will he learn his lesson.
Elfin69 chapter 2 . 10/4/2014
Guess Harry is not going to get his boring school year after all. Will the Cullens even come back now that Alice is not there to see any vision of Bella?
Elfin69 chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
At least Jasper did not have a part in it this time. Will he meet Harry at school or before then?
Hi chapter 10 . 10/2/2014
You should write more you're story is great!
jadedquartz chapter 10 . 10/3/2014
This is good.
Sliver of Melody chapter 10 . 10/3/2014
Very cool
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