|Reviews for Spark of the Soul|
| Unknownlight chapter 3 . 4/10
I had to reread the first two chapters because I had pretty much completely forgotten what had happened so far. I recognized the story instantly when it showed up in an email alert, though. I never thought the story would update again, but I'm so glad I was wrong!
I really love just the inherent way that you write, and the little comments within the narration. Like the bit in Ch. 2 where Dr. O'Shay was giving his diagnosis, and he was "warming up to the theory" as he was saying it. I found that a lot funnier than it really should be.
"Your world is wrong"... Is there a pattern behind the capitalization/bold/underline? Is there something to decode there, or is it just supposed to look weird?
Anyway, we've got a PLOT now, so I expect quick, frequent updates from here on out! Once every two years at least! ;)
On a related note, how is this story planned to be, anyway? Just something short, or something fairly significant? I'd prefer something short and sweet to a long story that never gets finished, so...yeah.
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next! (HINT HINT)
| Tetsuwan Penguin chapter 3 . 4/4
Well this sounds like a nice story so far. I'm glad I only just discovered it, rather than have started reading it 5 years ago and forgot everything! I do like the image of Astro as a little kid with a handful of a sister! I think the way he is depicted in the 2003 series is perhaps the most endearing of the three incarnations.
| Frozen Turbo chapter 2 . 8/18/2014
Poor Astro DO MORE
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/17/2014
DIS IS BOSS I love astro boy
| Reid958 chapter 2 . 5/17/2014
Great job, the words to your story is interesting and detailed, keep that up, can't wait this to update
| taneugene934 chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
I love it!
| Unknownlight chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Hey there. I'm back.
Is this fic ever going to be updated? I'm wondering whether I should remove it to make my story alert page a bit cleaner, but I still want to have faith.
| acalt1311 chapter 2 . 3/5/2013
I love your writing style its great and for absence of a better word neat I do hope you continue soon anyways love it so ill be checking in on this story
| Unknownlight chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
This is shockingly good. In fact, I think it's the only 2003 Astro Boy fanfic I've ever enjoyed. The plot, scenario, and characters feel so true to the anime it barely seems like I'm reading a fanfic. The main storyline hasn't even started yet, but I already love this.
...I say this, and then I look and see that the fic hasn't been updated in nearly three years.
*unleashes an incoherent verbal stream of swears*
Ah well...guess I'll track this anyway...just in case...
| kaitamis chapter 2 . 4/26/2012
this is cool I hope you write more soon :)
| crazy jaky chapter 2 . 1/28/2012
Poor, poor Astro. Forced to go shopping with bratty sister that is cute. I really want to read what happens next, so please update soon! D
| crazy jaky chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Nice story, it has an interesting plot and stays in perfect character. It also has *Pause for drama* ASTRO! D
| Lynphea chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
You think that person was bugging you? Well now thar you know me..you'll learn the REAL meaning of bugging..
| xxbloodygoddess666xxx chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
| scarlet luchia chapter 2 . 6/1/2011
pretty good so far! I really like you you reference the show lots, it keeps me remembering what happened and who characters are (I have a very small memory!). Please continue!