Reviews for Inviolate
Pyro-Wolf16 chapter 26 . 8/26
I really only read this because I enjoyed Variant Strain because DC isn't typically a universe i would try but I'm really glad I did! You write mystery and intelligent characters very well
theshadow603 chapter 26 . 8/15
This was really quite cool. Interesting characterisation and compelling integration of comic lore. It deserves a movie. Well done!
Praise chapter 1 . 5/28
Well done. Truly. I knew almost nothing of the DC Universe, and still this captivated me.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/13
womanizer womanizer womanizer womanizer
BajaB chapter 25 . 3/25
Re-read this whole thing in two days and loved it again just as much. Well done.
Lord Circe chapter 26 . 2/26
Let's go exploring.

Wonderful story.
The Observant Reader chapter 26 . 2/25
Awesome story, I kept on expecting Lex to send out some ominous message to the universe though! a truly amazing story :)
Asis chapter 26 . 2/6
I would honestly like to see a few chapters of this, where he finally finds his way back to his home dimension and it's now a New 52 universe minus the Guardians. I honestly think this Lex would do everything he could to get the Batgirl he met back into reality...
Dur'id the Druid chapter 26 . 12/29/2014
Wow. Read this in only a few settings. Well done!

Going to write any sequals as team Luthor make their way home?
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 26 . 12/19/2014
Great story! That was a fun read. It kept me up for a good two hours too. Not sure if that's a good or bad thing.
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 24 . 12/19/2014
I have to admit, you had me going there until only a couple paragraphs from the reveal, which is so close it doesn't really count. I was feeling cheated out of a massive battle scene and everything. Well done with this chapter. That quote at the end was a bit too cliché on top of everything else though...
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 18 . 12/19/2014
I have no words.
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 15 . 12/19/2014
Yes Luthor, we all love it when a plan comes together...
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 14 . 12/19/2014
I stand by what I said earlier, but this is getting me excited.
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 13 . 12/19/2014
...Uugghh. When it was revealed that it was aliens behind all of this, the first logical answer would be "The Guardians of Oa." I really hoped it would be someone different this time, but alas, they do make brilliant ancient uber villains. So yeah, that's not a very impressive reveal compared to the actual build up for me.
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