|Reviews for Inviolate|
| Guest chapter 26 . 10/14
A great story, thanks a lot. It had parts with a little too much tancion in too long time that made me tired of tansion and loosening it but overall it was very interesting.
| OmegaUltima chapter 26 . 9/20
A great read, though I kinda wish that there was a sequel, made up of Lex and Co's escapades through the multiverse, with occasional check-ins with their original home one; especially when they finally make it back; hell, they could have gone to Earth-Prime!
Ah well, I guess I'll just have to be happy with what you were able to give us; thank you for all your hard work!
| Anime Nightwing39 chapter 1 . 9/6
I haven’t read it yet is it good
| Intragalactic chapter 26 . 8/13
Thank you for the well-written story! I really appreciate the way it explains things (too many aliens on Earth, etc) that are otherwise just genre conventions.
| ChaoticInscriber chapter 26 . 8/13
Endlessly traveling the multiverse is a lot more palatable when your entire world, the only parts that mattered in the end, are onboard and travelling with you. Nothing left in their original home matters that much, not compared to each other.
They'll make one hell of a homecoming someday, given how they "ended", with amazing stories to tell. Maybe they'll even run across some of the other teams of variably-willing multiversal travelers, which could be amusing. But all that really matters to our lovely trio, is our lovely trio, and they're doing just fine~!
'Twas amazing, and I am delighted to have found this and chosen to try it out. A brilliant take on our Luthor Mastermind, one that highlights how epic he really is in a way that even some of his worst incarnations could have ended up following had the pieces to trigger it fallen just right.
He might often be Earth's Biggest D****b**, but he's also one of it's Greatest Minds, and finding out someone had messed with his head so early and often in his life? Even most of his worst selves would be Highly Offended and motivated to Save The Universe out of Spite for the ones who did it. He's still human, and still values freedom very highly, even when being a controlling jackass - he still has his own mental freedom, and generally speaking so does everyone else even if he's manipulating them through propaganda like a maestro. Killing people is one thing, using and manipulating and even torturing is acceptable when it yields useful results, but mind-control I think is one thing he disapproves of heavily long-term. (Excepting when he's legit batshit out of his mind, which even he usually later regrets the choices and disgusts himself with some of the sloppy work he did while Loco enough.) Occasionally briefly useful, Displeasing in the highest when too widespread and too long-lasting.
| ChaoticInscriber chapter 8 . 8/11
Of all of the people who could have found out about the massive conspiracy, Lex-Luthor-recently-detoxed was probably the worst case scenario~! Others might be incredibly dangerous to the population in their reactions, or purely self-destructive, but Lex is the one person who could actually pull off a full scale war on whoever is responsible, correctly hunt them down, and i/win/i.
I love it when he wields his brain properly to be more than a cartoonishly cranky supervillain. He's utterly brilliant in his own right, thoroughly out-snarking and out-sassing the Big Blue Boyscout should be a default mode for him. Twist his head up in knots trying to figure out if he's been insulted, complimented, or just plain dissed, all the while coming up roses to any witnesses, like say news cameras? XD Lex is a science genius and a multi-millionaire businessman on his own merits. Words as weapons should already be old hat to him by now. 3
Seeing him like this is a big part of the reason I actually quite like him as a character so much. I'm glad to have found this excellent example of Lex Luthor Epicness~!
| MBurris chapter 4 . 4/10
Brilliant, chilling, captivating ... and I can hear it all in my head as a long series of episodes from the Justice League.
| PLEASE READ ME chapter 10 . 3/12
Challenge: at least three hundred chapters/Page's long, a triple crossover, SI in legend of Zelda breath of the wild vers character, helm of order / sorcerer supreme / iron Man, tec, magic, advise many useing magic to get fate stay knight Excalibur, highschool DxD Excalibur bits and Sonic knight of the wind Excalibur and make a Nexus forge to forge the Excaliburs to one sword with all the power and none of the downsides maybe add ourou and/or animantum vibrainum, true silver, hero metal or anything else you can think up he also can find and dig deeper and safer ie tec magic and order, order Gannon can't touch or affect because he is Alined with corrupt kaos order says f*** you to that stuff...
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/5
that was surprisingly decent.
| pKmAN chapter 26 . 11/24/2018
Really enjoyed the story!
| elixirmaster chapter 26 . 11/14/2018
Somehow I ended up reading the epilogue instead of chapter 1; luckily, this ended well and definitely felt like the start of a new epic story so that was fun - I will probably give the whole story a read once I forget this, though, right now I'll read something else you have written.
| RattailBoy chapter 26 . 10/31/2018
I can't believe it took me this long to find this absolutely amazing story. It's been out for more than seven years at this point! I absolutely love what you've done with the characters in this story but especially Lex. You really humanized him, gave him understandable reactions that still feel like Lex Luthor, but also fit perfectly with the reformation that he works his way through in the story. I also love that you don't have him end as a goodie two shoes hero like some redemption stories have people do. They run too far the other way away from what they were in their search for redemption, but you kept true to Lex's character and it worked wonderfully. I'm really glad I stumbled across this, even if it took quite a while. Thank's for writing such a fantastic story.
| Hathowda Jun chapter 26 . 10/19/2018
Didn't understand most of the stuff Lex went on about. The impression desired I suppose. Good story.
| Aetherium21 chapter 25 . 10/14/2018
Damn this story was phenomenal. I’m 7 years late, but this was some top 10 favorites material.
| Mari Wollsch chapter 26 . 10/7/2018
super great xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx