|Reviews for Inviolate|
| Delusional Fishies chapter 6 . 10/5/2010
| nick012000 chapter 15 . 10/5/2010
Nice story. I sort of wonder what Luthor's plan's going to turn out to be like. Please write quickly!
| aledeth chapter 15 . 10/4/2010
The clever one-liners that Luthor throws outs are what makes this amazing. His clever interpretation of Batman's background is hilarious as well.
I love that Bruce & Co are able to play it completely straight despite how wrong Lex actually is.
It feels like there's a bit much of everything going Luthor's way, but he really is just that damned smart that I'm able to wave it off.
Good stuff overall. Happy to have found this.
| Enigmatic Crayons chapter 15 . 10/4/2010
Lex's story of the Batman sounds better than the real thing, no doubt why he picked it over less likely stories (like Bruce Wayne being Batman. I mean, seriously, as if.) The thought of Bruce Wayne being the shadowy overseer, redeeming criminals, just fits so well. As I read his theory, I was filled with the warm, fuzzy feeling of total satisfaction. This is canon, right?
| shanejayell chapter 15 . 10/3/2010
This is DAMN cool. I'm quite impressed with how well you've thought it all through. Update soon! :)
| deathsheadx chapter 13 . 10/3/2010
this story is a stroke of genius i eagerly await the next part.
| anon chapter 15 . 10/1/2010
Forgot to say thanks for mentioning the GL stuff especially John Stewart’s and it was twice as awesome having Luthor bring them up to them
HA Lex that was awesome what he did and threatened to do to the coffee boy
Doesn’t the FDA take years but whatever makes it cooler and I might be wrong
Love seeing Bruce and Lex interact
Oh yeah Lex accounting and funding and bringing up his own “destroy superman” budget of course Bruce is Matches, Draper is Tim Drake, and he’s wrong about Joker and Two-Face sort of but they are interesting ideas and I like pointing out little to no gain and love the redemption path
Yeah didn’t Cluemaster join Suicide Squad to seek redemption and make Steph proud of him hope for more redemption
Ha verify all the way I liked bringing up Kryptonian historical record and Thanagarian archeological evidence
Oh YES! Lex really wants redemption I love that! and of course he wants people to achieve their potential and be free and that as the Martian Manhunter points out he may be right about his belief of being the only chance for humanity to do that and wants people to make fun of Superman for that of course I’m not a big fan of costumes either I know in real life it’s merchandising and that is where the real money is and it’s a business and they have a bottom line and with Supes it’s the dress of his people, Wonder Woman magic armor a gift form her gods, even Green Lantern it’s a police uniform, but most of them are silly
| Saeth Ceirwyn chapter 15 . 10/1/2010
Bruce and Lex are so much fun together! I love how they try to push each other's buttons, and it's amazing they can squeeze both sets of egos into the same room. Yet, they *do* respect each other in a sort of weird way. Angel's support was also an unexpected but interesting addition.
Things seem to be going well, maybe even too well. I admit, I'm a little concerned about something backfiring and getting Lex into trouble. It's only a matter of time before he hits some snags in his plan or someone tries to kill him (again). He has a long list of enemies, and frankly, when word of what's going on gets out to most of the JLA members, I'd be surprised if they didn't give him some sort of protection (and make use of his mad investigating skills). I have this terrifying vision of Lex, Batman, and Question all working together, something which would make even the most powerful of beings shiver.
I'm also looking forward to seeing some more Lex and Superman, since it's only a matter of time before Superman hears about this and pays Lex a visit. I sense the start of an odd little friendship with Bruce and Clark in Lex's future. Lex can be very sweet when he's not posturing and being an evil megalomaniac.
I also can't help but sense Darkseid getting involved in this somehow. Don't ask me why. It's just a feeling. Hopefully, the Guardians haven't been stupid enough to mess with him. Either way, I can't imagine him being please with a group of beings trying to take over a planet he wants.
On the mythology front, Lex is in fine Loki form here. Batman is clearly Vidar (god of vengeance), because if everyone else dies, Batman will be the last one standing. And he'll kill Fenrir to because he's just that awesome.
| Saeth Ceirwyn chapter 13 . 9/26/2010
This chapter is very funny, which I blame on Lex teddy bears Lex's geeking mind. Lex is such a bizarre mix of evil overlord, greedy capitalist, and enthusiastic/sarcastic geek of course, Eve and Mercy only make it more funny.
BTW, I really like how you're handling Mercy. She's getting more attention than I typically see her getting in most fics.
On a more interesting note, you Lex is very Loki-esque. He's got that whole trickster savior thing going on all the way to Ragnarok.
| Saeth Ceirwyn chapter 14 . 9/11/2010
This is excellent! I do wonder where The Question is since he'd be all for this mass conspiracy.
| Saeth Ceirwyn chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Somewhere in the Marvel-verse, Loki takes umbridge to Lex's stealing his brother's name. *snicker* That's seven years bad luck for you Lex! And an office full of pink poodles, just for kicks.
Anyway, it's nice to see bad-ass Luthor. We don't often get him shaking another supervillain by the scruff of the neck.
| anon chapter 14 . 8/23/2010
All right Swamp Thing shout out
Aw yeah a (fake) code 060606
All right Lex AWESOME!
Go Lex talking about how power is a tool and nothing more and his duty to humanity
It’s not that he’s a nice guy it’s that he’s right about most things he’s too smart not to be
| anon chapter 13 . 8/12/2010
Forgot to say thanks for Bones and the others got me thinking of Cameron Chase
| anon chapter 13 . 8/4/2010
HA more distracting hip swaying than absolutely necessary
Lex would end the world’s problems just to prove he could
Holy crap they did that to Lobo now with the universal overpopulation problem you can see they had a point but still other means could have been at least attempted first
WOW Rann also
You got me thinking of Daxamites also
Again with the Burning they were dangerous but obviously they took it too far
Yeah the Guardians can come off as douchebags a lot of cosmic beings come off that way it got me thinking how Dr. Doom has gone against Hell Lords, gods, and Cosmic beings and won
You got me thinking why stop with Kryptonian powers for the human race we could go with Magog his energy is at least equal to Alan Scott’s green flame although I’d rather have it color white like the Entity the first
This is awesome
You are a genius
P.S. Kilowog’s home planet is spelled Bolovax Vik
| pacificuser chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
A good story,however it needs quite a bit of proof-reading to make the paragraphs flow better.