|Reviews for Inviolate|
| shanejayell chapter 23 . 12/31/2010
Okay, ORACLE as a Gold Lantern? _ That I was not expecting. Damn cool.
| CJNyfalt chapter 23 . 12/31/2010
Great chapters! It will be interesting to see who got the last ring.
| yellulhchicken chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Luthor as a possible 'anti-hero'? don't remember it being done before but so far your story seems plausible and nicely written.
| MDLv3.2 chapter 22 . 12/18/2010
Emotion projection, hm? Much simpler than what I thought. I knew the Guardians had to have a fallback plan in case large numbers of Lanterns started thinking for themselves.
And now Sinestro? I'm not sure that's a good idea from Lex's viewpoint - Sinestro, when properly written (which is what's going to happen here, if the previous 21 chapters are any indication), is very very devious, sneaky, insidious, and dangerous. Of course, so's Lex, which explains how they can have friendly conversations exchanging old stories. But Sinestro might just help take out the Guardians and then eliminate the only real threat to him left - namely Lex and Earth. "The treatment worked but the patient died" scenario.
The war continues, and my blood pressure rises. Tension, conflict ... Good Stuff!
| cglasgow chapter 22 . 12/17/2010
Hah, awesome. I knew Raker Qarrigat couldn't be that stupid unless he was under outside mental influence.
Also, is it just me, or is Sinestro the /perfect/ fall guy to hang this entire mess on if it all goes wrong? Gets Luthor and the heroes of Earth almost entirely off the hook for the catastrophe.
After all, who else but the Green Lantern Corps' most legendary nemesis could ally with the Manhunter, Apokolips, and the Reach, then use misinformation deliberately leaked to Earth's hero community (whom Sinestro is also known to have issues with) and Earth's premier supervillain (whom Sinestro has also met in the day) to manipulate everyone from the Rannians to the Thanagarians through them? And to do it all from his prison cell, why, that was epic genius! /wink
And I'm pretty sure Lex Luthor has already figured this part out, being a million times smarter than I am. *g*
| Saeth Ceirwyn chapter 22 . 12/17/2010
Sinestro! Yeeeeesss! This is just getting better and better.
| anon chapter 22 . 12/17/2010
Forgot to say last time building is far more difficult than destroying
That was awesome!
You are a genius
| shanejayell chapter 22 . 12/17/2010
Ha! I KNEW Sinestro would come up eventually. Cool.
| deathsheadx chapter 22 . 12/17/2010
this new chapter makes me happy! only bad thing is the wait till the next chapter.
| dfshie chapter 22 . 12/17/2010
E! P! I! C!
| Gabe chapter 21 . 12/10/2010
Holy... holy bananas in hotsauce, that was a trip. Masterfully done. I applaud you.
| Acyl chapter 21 . 11/27/2010
I actually remember Brimstone from his appearance in the old Firestorm comics...and this whole sequence made me laugh. Since it's totally canon that an OMGWTF giant Brimstone can form from stellar plasma.
I wasn't expecting that as a solution! Genius. Absolutely genius.
| MDLv3.2 chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
I figured that Lex would shape the explosion of the core fragment, but I hadn't known of the Techno-Seed. Nice thinking.
But I'm thinking that the Guardians have been programming their Lanterns in Max Lord style (subconscious posthypnotic suggestions). Telling the Corps that Luthor and his allies are out to destroy Oa when they were in the middle of saving it would be something that would make most folks raise an eyebrow. If a few dozen Lanterns don't at least say "Huh?" then they've got to be programmed for obedience at some level.
Oh my blood pressure! The excitement is building! The climax to this little war will probably give me a coronary! Good work!
I'm still waiting for the moment Supes is forced to admit Luthor's actually better at the good-guy stuff than he is. Heh heh. :D
| anon chapter 21 . 11/27/2010
Forgot to say last time being one of the good guys isn’t as easy as the Justice League make it look, but since when has Luthor ever backed down from a challenge
The rest of the so-called geniuses with the JLA weren't much help. Awesome. To be fair though Lex is more of a scientist, and while perhaps Steel, and maybe Mister Terrific are also and so are the others to lesser extents, Lex’s scientific expertise is greater, even without his superior intellect
I really like seeing it like this from Lex’s point of view, it really shows they don’t intentionally wait until the last possible moment just to make it more dramatic
My science is better than yours. SWEET!
Should have known it wasn’t going to be that easy hope Team Grunt handles this
Lex could use how the Guardians abandoned Qarrigat to get him to listen
This is awesome you are a genius
| Saeth Ceirwyn chapter 21 . 11/27/2010
Well, Lex is going to get some bruises, but I suspect Qarrigat is already suspicious about the situation and the irregularities thus far.