Reviews for Inviolate
Lord Circe chapter 26 . 2/26/2015
Let's go exploring.

Wonderful story.
The Observant Reader chapter 26 . 2/25/2015
Awesome story, I kept on expecting Lex to send out some ominous message to the universe though! a truly amazing story :)
Asis chapter 26 . 2/6/2015
I would honestly like to see a few chapters of this, where he finally finds his way back to his home dimension and it's now a New 52 universe minus the Guardians. I honestly think this Lex would do everything he could to get the Batgirl he met back into reality...
Dur'id the Druid chapter 26 . 12/29/2014
Wow. Read this in only a few settings. Well done!

Going to write any sequals as team Luthor make their way home?
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 26 . 12/19/2014
Great story! That was a fun read. It kept me up for a good two hours too. Not sure if that's a good or bad thing.
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 24 . 12/19/2014
I have to admit, you had me going there until only a couple paragraphs from the reveal, which is so close it doesn't really count. I was feeling cheated out of a massive battle scene and everything. Well done with this chapter. That quote at the end was a bit too cliché on top of everything else though...
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 18 . 12/19/2014
I have no words.
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 15 . 12/19/2014
Yes Luthor, we all love it when a plan comes together...
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 14 . 12/19/2014
I stand by what I said earlier, but this is getting me excited.
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 13 . 12/19/2014
...Uugghh. When it was revealed that it was aliens behind all of this, the first logical answer would be "The Guardians of Oa." I really hoped it would be someone different this time, but alas, they do make brilliant ancient uber villains. So yeah, that's not a very impressive reveal compared to the actual build up for me.
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 11 . 12/19/2014
I'd leave more reviews but it's hard to concentrate on anything other than reading and clicking 'Next'... This story really has brilliant narrative, it just makes you... feel, you know?
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 8 . 12/19/2014
"His genitals were altered to allow him to retract them entirely into his torso."

I didn't just recoil and scream "Holy shit!?" at 4 in the morning. Nope. Nuh uh.
UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 4 . 12/19/2014
Oh god. This story is too gripping and it's only the fourth chapter yet...
madbrad chapter 26 . 11/5/2014
A very enjoyable story, even if the ever-growing magnitude of it was starting to tear my imagination into shreds by the end. :-)

As a Superman fan I was a bit disappointed that he was relegated to 'just a grunt' status. I like my chosen hero to be #1 on the hit parade, but with Parallax and Ion around - probably Stewart too - that wasn't the case. Just a personal observation, no criticism of your story.

The redemption of the various villains - Metallo (maybe), the Joker, Sinestro (maybe) ... that was honestly inspiring stuff. Oh, and Lex himself, of course. And the destruction of the real villains was quite satisfying, although with your plots-within-plots I was afraid they were maybe going to survive. I'm glad Luthor snuffed out the little b-st-rds. :-)

Congratulations on a fine story, and thank you for writing it!
Publicola chapter 15 . 10/23/2014
Of course, in my case I don't know nearly enough about the Justice League universe to know how wrong Lex's thoughts on Batman really are - I know Bruce is the Batman, but have no idea who any of the other characters you mention are or how plausible it would be that they would have been recruited by Bruce to fight on his behalf. Still, I really like this - the whole 'plausible but laughably wrong to the readers' POV' is always a fun trope - and really look forward to seeing you resolve the big issues you've raised here. Almost definitely going on my list of 'Favorites' once I finish reading, so great work!
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