Reviews for Fracture
AnnaOxford chapter 1 . 11/27/2015
This is more than a bit angsty or melodramatic, this is freaking heartbreaking. I hate it when they act like cowards, especially when it's Hermione.
StyleStalker chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
This seems like, it could have really happened. It fits so good! Love it!
Happy chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
Yes, fantastic!
lilbobcatgrl88 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I think it was perfect :)...I do not think it was melodramatic...good job! Are you planning on continuing its a good start
DMHG3 chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Terrible..Draco is way OOC in this story,actually he's more acting like Ron himself. And the fact that she chose Ron is disturbing. This should be a dramione
whatweareafreaidof chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
i alway belive that ron was a far better man then draco, why he has hurt hermoine she has hurt him but both love each other, and it was nice for once to see that draco did not get the girl
MalfoySouza chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
lalapop chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Very dramatic. Just the way I like it. Nice work!
Sarah.Rachel chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Very nicely written! Heartbreaking and sad...but you are a very talented writer! I loved it!
AngelHeartOfMine chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
I loved it, really nicely written. I do feel for Draco, stupid Ron! (
JustSitBackAndWatch chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
I love it! Excellent work. I really enjoyed it! (:
cassy chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
great work - i love it.
Wooden Tulips chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Ugh...heartbreaking. It was tempered though by Tom trying to get Laura to projectile vomit on me. Gotta love family. That said, I love it! So sad but it works. Stupid Ron. gr.
pippop1234 chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Nice! I like that you managed to tell the story mostly with dialogue, and yet the things they said still managed to sound natural.
justonedimple chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
I love it, one of the best I've read, to be honest. You have talent, and I LOVE IT.