|Reviews for Angel's Wish|
| Kira the cat chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
This was great. Its been a while since I last played Rhapsody and Its been even longer since I thought about looking for a fic. This was adorable to read and even better while listening to Regret Message (if you aren't a Vocaloid fan totally look it up) thanks for a great fic.
| Fairy of the Flames chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
I love this. Kururu is amazing. I was so sad when I found out about this. I love the game too. I love to fight with Kururu.
| Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Kururu's true nature, I would have liked to see more of that in the game, like what you have here. Your effort was sucessful.
| Spirit Seer chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
This is so sweet! :D I love it! You did a really nice job on it; it really warmed my heart.
You mentioned constructive critism, but I really don't have anything to complain about. The only section that might've been able to be touched up is the second to last paragraph, since the dialogue wasn't seperated.
"Kururu? What are you doing?" Cornet moaned. "It's okay. Sleep well. Tomorrow we will storm into Marjoly's castle. You don't want to fail, do you?" Cornet murmured," I won't." She once again fell to her world. Deep and calm, her very own world.
I'm assuming the mother is speaking in this paragraph, that's why I said it needed to be seperated, to show the different speakers:
"Kururu? What are you doing?" Cornet moaned.
"It's okay. Sleep well. Tomorrow we will storm into Marjoly's castle. You don't want to fail, do you?"
Cornet murmured, "I won't." She once again fell to her world. Deep and calm, her very own world.
There we go! Simple fix. While Cherie doesn't leave until after Ferdinand is rescued, and I feel the insinuation here is that she leaves before, this is a very sweet fic. I really enjoyed it; it warmed my heart. :D Thanks for the great read!