Reviews for Hoping for Happiness
BoneyCastle237 chapter 46 . 3/30/2014
I have to tell you this is one of the most INCREDIBLE stories i have ever had the pleasure of reading! The progression of Tony and Ziva's relationship was absolutely perfect. You did not rush it at all, you perfectly described both of their feelings as they grew from being friends to more than friends and Ziva's fear of having sex and Tony's fear of commitment were so accurate it was just incredible! Seriously i just do not have the words to describe how believable and just real this story was, but it is possibly the best one i have ever read and I intend to read it over and over again in the near future! Seriously great job!
mericips chapter 19 . 1/31/2014
Hey, I like your story. Beautifully written -even though there are spelling mistakes - and the charaterization is spot on.
Only thing I found a bit out of place was Lucy. I liked her, don't get me wrong, but at times I found her to be too overbearing.
I get that they treated each other like family, but... she was there opening the door every single time they were back from a date or work.

If it were me, I would have been on the verge of a nervous breakdown.
Apart from that, kudos for a story well developed
Guest chapter 5 . 12/9/2013
DC has two senators total number 102.
Sunnyside2 chapter 46 . 12/2/2013
One of the best Tiva romance long fics I've read. Seriously. Perfect and exactly how I like them. Tiva relationship as the main focus with just the right amount of casefic sprinkled for variety. I love how slowly you developed their relationship, keeping in mind all Ziva had gone through. I'm really just not feeling eloquent enough to describe how much I loved this story. It's a favorite for sure. One to keep in my files for re-reading. I'm enjoying reading the sequel and can't wait to read their continued journey. I love the new characters you created, especially Lucy. Will eagerly wait for your next update.
D chapter 30 . 8/5/2013
i would have liked more with ziva taking care of tony. you kinda fast tracked it into a couple paragraphs. you took a lot of time for tony taking care of ziva i think ya should do the same with ziva taking care of tony. other than that i love this story so far, it great
nando2k50 chapter 46 . 7/27/2013
I did love ALL the 46 chapters, very well done...
Mountain Dew 17 chapter 31 . 7/17/2013
Loved the Hill Street Blues quote. All though, it was Sgt. Esterhaus who said "Let's be careful out there" at the end of roll call, at the beginning of each episode
jdeasselin chapter 46 . 7/8/2013
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hellishrose chapter 32 . 6/12/2013
Very in-character- The proposal was beautiful. I'm curious how Eli will really react now that they are engaged.
hellishrose chapter 25 . 6/12/2013
You did a great job.. the build up and suspense was worth it. Truly beautiful
hellishrose chapter 21 . 6/12/2013
That was so beautifully sweet and I am glad they are moving towards a deeper relationship together. I am glad he finally told her how he felt with his words (his actions have anyways told of his feelings).
hellishrose chapter 19 . 6/12/2013
Wow that conversation was so full of emotion but it feels like they needed to have it to move forward. They are becoming adults together in this romantic relationship and healing one another. Job well done!
hellishrose chapter 14 . 6/12/2013
I literally just read through the first 14 chapters and all I can say is wow. The characters are accurately portrayed. The love story is beautiful while still be realistic to what Tony and Ziva would have to face together. The cases are interesting. The dialogue is superb. It a knock ut all around. I can't wait to continue but so far I must thank you for an incredible story!
nando2k50 chapter 40 . 6/7/2013
And that is what marriage is about, been in each other corner...
nando2k50 chapter 38 . 6/5/2013
Great chapter... Very well done...
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