Reviews for How Destiny Began
IonaPen chapter 4 . 12/6/2009
lol, keep writting! i just love carlisle! hes so kind!
sleepysheepie chapter 3 . 12/3/2009
I love the fact that you're attempting to write the beginnings of the wonderful story of Carlisle and Esme. They obviously have true love for one another; seeing as each has found their mate for the rest of eternity. What I would tell you is this, though. The story is passing me by far too quickly. I would really appreciate this endeavor much more if you showed the "nitty-gritty" behind the scenes of the story. Essentially, you as the teller of their tale know the complete history of what happened between Carlisle and Esme and as such you should reveal their thoughts and emotions far more explicitly. Basically, make the story more detail oriented and not as simplistic; think of all the hidden twists not even SM knows about. By taking on the difficult task of weaving this particular story, you are taking on a big responsibility to uphold the great legend that we all know their meeting to be.
stalburkslovers chapter 3 . 11/30/2009

esme and carlisle ftw. i love reading there story...this one is very good
charl88 chapter 2 . 11/27/2009
aww no

its sad that esme turned to that
LilVirga chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Nothing like a good Carlisle x Esme story. I love it!