Reviews for The Lyoko Wizards
SakuraDragomir chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
great chapter
awesome writer
please update soon
I can't wait for more adventure and action
chaohacker chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
I have no idea if you and ethan12 are the same person, but your writing styles are the same: less than mediocre. First off, you have little to no capitalization, and it's a big block of text with no quotes.

Your second chapter broke on of the rules: 'no one or two liners'

In other words, this isn't a story. It's just a couple paragraphs with no plot.

You failed to say who you are in this story. Yumi? Ulrich? Odd? If you're just you, as in a self-insert character, you failed to introduce yourself or how you got into the gang.

Instant plot failure.

Remove or be reported for disregard of formatting.
Zack Hiwatari-Chan chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
this is a good start you should write more