|Reviews for Rotten On The Inside|
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/13
Dun dun dun! I expected him to attack the mom.
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/13
I knew the partner was Larxene! Didn't know about her and Demyx, though...
| youngnozomi chapter 9 . 1/28/2010
Wow! Confusing. Why'd you do it Zexy. Demx no! I'm going to my emo corner now. Bye. Good job by the way kept me on my toes. :)
| FoxFlyer chapter 9 . 1/23/2010
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT! *heart broken sobbing* How evil dpo you have to be to malke someone kill the peson they love? Oh the horror!
Oh my god, it was so good. )
| CaCoPhOnY Of ScReAmS chapter 9 . 1/15/2010
YES! Well, wait...no, it's still pretty sad that Demyx got killed, but...YES! I guessed who the betrayers were! *Dances* Actually, it was pretty easy to figure it out after you gave the hint about his mother being alive, and I figured that it'd have to be his mother, AND Zexion who betrayed him.
Although...I feel really lousy after reading the ending. Has anyone ever told you that your stories are WAY too sad? *sobs* maybe you should try writing something HAPPY!
Actually, don't so that. It wouldn't be as interesting. xD
Anyways, I'm rambling by now, so I think I'll just shut up and send this review~! :3
| Keys2theKingdom chapter 9 . 1/10/2010
Poor Zexy...might as well have aimed the gun at himself...
| Shadow of a Fallen Angel chapter 9 . 1/10/2010
Well, when you were talking about ultimate betrayal in the summary, i figured that Zexion not being dead and this whole conspiracy was said betrayal, so i guess i didn't really see that coming at all. My mind is already cooking up how it ends past that point...
| TheRenoApocalypse chapter 8 . 1/7/2010
Oh. I a loving this fic. D
| Shadow of a Fallen Angel chapter 8 . 1/5/2010
oh those dirty...Axel and Roxas i mean...
And Demyx's mother...alive...wow...this story keeps taking all kinda of crazy turns...
| youngnozomi chapter 8 . 1/4/2010
This story is awesome, wish I found it sooner. Axel... Just what are you after? Who's side are you on. Larxene was a bit mean. No Demyx. Don't go that way you'll get hurt. Zexion, quickly save him... Wait he's hurt. Larxene help Demyx. What will happen next. I'll be back. See ya and good luck!_
| The Endless Cycle chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
It kinda got confusing in chapter six, but overall it's like a spy movie shortenedn and made better, in my opinion. But then again, Zemyx makes everything better :'D I also like your writing style, it's easy to follow and well written, I just think the action scenes could do some work though. Not bad at all overall ;D
| CaCoPhOnY Of ScReAmS chapter 7 . 12/24/2009
Oh damn! Larxene IS Zexion's partner! I totally called that!
The twin thing was a surprise though. A pleasant one~!
I can't wait to see what's next, this totally make me like, 100x more interested in what's going on!
(oh, and P.S., Don't let Roxas die, PLEASE?)
| Shadow of a Fallen Angel chapter 7 . 12/22/2009
Interesting chapter. I had a feeling his partner would be Larxene, but i didn't see the twin sister thing coming...probably should have though...
another awesome chapter XD
| Sightlines chapter 7 . 12/21/2009
So Larxene's his partner. I would thought for sure it was Lex or Xigbar. But nope it's Larxene! Still a very good choice :D. and Demyx and Larxene being twins that is fabulous! Update soon :)
| Shadow of a Fallen Angel chapter 6 . 12/17/2009
i think that was a great chapter. It was nice to have some full on action and crazy race car driving XD
don't keep me waiting too long for the next chapter X3