|Reviews for Memories of a Demon|
| an chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
its good, at first i thought naruto was gana be aizen or something,because deception is the most useful thing to a aizen and naruto in a way have the same goal they want to defeat soul society, and along the way naruto goal could have changed or something.
| Sephiroth owns u all chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
awesome story naruto is gin ichimaru
| colin chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
So I would think that the Purge would take place during the 1100's or so when Samurai and Ninja were more common so they could have centuries to hone their skills and plan. Aizen would be a convienient tool for them to use cause Aizen would have nothing on those that lived and breathed deception during life and death. Plus Aizen is only a few hundred years old this would let them be stronger than Aizen and use him as a public enemy while they secretly help him.
| chm01 chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
nice, as for the academy I say skip it but consider using flashbacks
| Fox Boss chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
Do you think that you can make Naruto's Zanpakto Mihawk's Kokutō Yoru from One Piece, with it's shikai ability being able to cut through 'anything', including attacks, fire, kido, etc, all the way to the cellular level like his RasenShuriken. The phrase would probably be along the line of "Cut the World in half."
| Oramo chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
This is an excellent story and easily has the potential of being one of my favorite crossovers. Considering how few Naruto/Bleach crossovers are actually good, I think that's saying something (not because my standards are so awesome or anything, but because of how hard it is to make a believable crossover). I especially like how you made the difference in power between shinobi and shinigami realistic. I am of the opinion that a shinigami captain would be hard put to defeat a ninja of Pain and Itachi's calibur. I even think Senjutsu Naruto could defeat Ichigo, though only after an epic struggle. But, I digress. There are few if any suggestions I could give you. Your grammar is superb and the way in which you lead the reader through Naruto's psyche is fantastic. I would like to suggest you make the Rookie Nine and Team Gai an integral part of the story, but that's just personal preference.
Keep up the good work and review as quickly as possible!
| Flying Raijin chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
This is a new idea as far as NarutoBleach Xover goes, and I think it has some potential. I'll be keepin' an eye on this!
| Ganja Naraku chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
I'll admit, reading the summary didn't give me much hope that this would be done as well as it was. Though I'll also admit I'm not altogether impressed. You need to flesh out your descriptions a bit. Write it as if your readers have no idea what Naruto or Bleach is.
Other that the above your story has a lot of potential. I'll be keeping an eye on this for a time andf see where it goes.
Also If you would like a beta reader I'd be more than happy to assist you.
| God of wind4 chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Bloody Hell! This is a great story. I have read several Naruto/Bleach Crossovers and they were all great! Perfect! But this is one that I have never read. I think this is a Brillant One. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| mfmxxx chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Here's an idea,
Make him fall for someone, Yoruichi is the best bet, as she's more like him, etc, and have it so he's conflicted? Otherwise the story is just nothing to overcome etc.
| Outkast000 chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
No! You should keep the Hatred for awhile, have Naruto continue with it an snatch the So-Taicho position! There aren't that many stories doing that, if any at all. Naruto needs to keep the Hatred, that'll make the story that much interesting. Oh, you should make him Hate Byakuya, Yamamoto, an Chamber of 46, if you allow the grudge to leave at least. Because one was the person who killed him, an the other two approved of the 'Purge'. See?
| OverLordRevan chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
| knuckz chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Not a bad start. Still much to go however. Let's see where you take it.
| TenWings chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
| BlueBakaNinja chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
this is going to very interesting. hope to read more.
as for the academy, skip it if their is not alot of important plot points that happen there which can be covered with a flashback or two.