|Reviews for Don't give up on love Chobi!|
| voodooqueen126 chapter 3 . 1/30/2011
May I ask why everything is in bold, italics and underlined? These features should really only be used to emphasise occasional words.
| voodooqueen126 chapter 2 . 1/30/2011
Rather than writing *character name* "Speech" you should write
"speech" said character name.
Said is one of the unobtrusive words in the English language and you must not be like a long winded victorian author and fear overusing it.
| voodooqueen126 chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
May I ask if English is your first language? Because this has the potential to be a really good story, but you do need help with that grammar and syntax.
| paintgurl chapter 2 . 12/5/2009
Yi San is one of my favorite dramas. So I am happy there is some stories for it.
Your story has potentail, However your writing style makes it hard to concentrate on the story with the * around the names and the 2 chapters feel rushed. And not enough descrption.
| TenTenD chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Nice story my sister-in-writing. This is so sweet. Love Cho Bi's way of thinking.
Go Dae Su/Cho Bi couple.