Reviews for Not Quite Aces
FabPezBerry78 chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
Awesome i love :)
v chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Well at first i thought it was very good, bu then it started to sound like poor porn scenario..except that, i liked your story :3
mione03 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Hello dear, how are you?

I watch this film tonight and as soon as finish i come to to search fics about Jennifer's Body and i find two stories wrote by you and i am very happy, because i love your fics!

Congratulations for this story and i will go read the continuate and hope you write more fics about this film!

Hope see you soon!

Kisses
mione03
Chloeismine chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
really good
Kelsey Pearl chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Oh gawd.
snakeyninja chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
this story is so cruel. haha!loved this!
Quocalimar chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
I liked this story alot, and it's too bad the movie couldn't have ended happily for the biffs.
home to molly chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
that was awesome.
Kales chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
This review is for: "Not Quite Aces"

I. Fucking. Loved it.

Awesome work! Your tone is playful and excellent. Not to mention the clever "corny" banter. Too bad the actual movie wasn't as good as your rendition.

Your portrayal of the girls was spot on too. Great job on the consistency. Megan Fox and Amanda Seyfried were both perfect for those characters, and you continued to play true.

KUDOS!
RKF22 chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
great story
Echokid14 chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Very good story I really liked it! you definately captured Needy and Jennifer's personalities. You really should make a follow up to where Needy finds a way to get the demon out of Jennifer's body. But either way keep up the good work!
J.I. Fevang chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
That was amazing! It felt like something Diablo Cody could have actually written. I loved it! :D Thanks for writing!
vanz chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
this is disgusting ! its really creepy and pervy and i don't know how you write thid stuff i personally think you need to see a therapist if this is wat you think about yuk !
Sheena-MFfan chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
This was awesome. I absolutely LOVE Jennifer's Body, and I love your fic too. It's such a shame that this scene didn't unfold in the movie... would have made it like 10x better :P

This was very cute and you matched the characters personalities really well. Can't wait to read more from you. :)

Kin-chan
The Lady Vampire Lilac chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
“I’ve got a demon renting out the basement of my soul, but I saved the main floor for you.”- Loved this line!

This entire story is just awesome! Heart femmeslash! Heart Jennifer's Body! Heart Needy and Jenn! Just heart it all! This story is the BOMB! Great job! :-)
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