Reviews for Not Quite Aces
Sheena-MFfan chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
This was awesome. I absolutely LOVE Jennifer's Body, and I love your fic too. It's such a shame that this scene didn't unfold in the movie... would have made it like 10x better :P

This was very cute and you matched the characters personalities really well. Can't wait to read more from you. :)

The Lady Vampire Lilac chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
“I’ve got a demon renting out the basement of my soul, but I saved the main floor for you.”- Loved this line!

This entire story is just awesome! Heart femmeslash! Heart Jennifer's Body! Heart Needy and Jenn! Just heart it all! This story is the BOMB! Great job! :-)
Emma James chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
naughty needy, hehe
XxXDeathByDawnXxX chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Best part of the whole thing:

“I’ll give you a cookie when we’re done. I have one in my backpack from lunch.”


“It’s one of those ones with M&M’s and shit in it. You love those bastards,” Jennifer said, not quite willing to give up yet.


“You look very pretty this evening.”


It was really
Lubov chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Honestly, your JB's stories are better and better. This one is absolutely amazing, it's funny, cute and so interesting to read, it leave you flat, you only want to read more. The dialogues are so clever. I admire you. Hope you write more of this. I enjoyed it.
I Am Lady J chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Hot and sexy. I really, really loved the dialogue and sounded really in line with what was in the movie. Loved the interaction between Jennifer and Needy. I think that they're one of the hottest femmeslash pairings and this did it justice. Great fic.
DayDreamer007 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
damn... it couldn't get any better! Totally loved it! Please make another chapter! It is perfectly written, with the real character's tone. Man, if this was in the movie, I'll probably pee lol..
ThistleL chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
This was simply perfect and went along with my thoughts during the entire movie. :) I loved it. And the nick names were cute.
spashley20 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
“You’re not going to like actually ‘eat’ me, right? You’re just gonna … with your mouth … like you usually do, right?”

so funny. it has to be hard to write these characters, and this was just perfect.

awesome job!
BlaireBanner chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
I agree. That is the way the scene should've unfolded. I was disappointed at the fact that Needy doesn't really try to get Jennifer back. It just seem like she would've, you know?
gage chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
keep it going!
Diablo Priest chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
You captured the tone of these characters perfectly. There 's a lot of great phrases here: "I've got a demon renting out the basement of my soul..."! Great stuff. Needy afraid of Jennifer's love bites-bravo. I enjoyed all the cute flirting, too. Good job! But how do you expel a demon from your biff?
grangergirl22 chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
friggin awesome
FaberryFan chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Awesome :)
SlytherinWarriorSlayer chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
love it

cant wait to read on and see if she gets the demon out of jennifer

update soon please x
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