Reviews for Not Quite Aces
Emma James chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
naughty needy, hehe
XxXDeathByDawnXxX chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Best part of the whole thing:

“I’ll give you a cookie when we’re done. I have one in my backpack from lunch.”


“It’s one of those ones with M&M’s and shit in it. You love those bastards,” Jennifer said, not quite willing to give up yet.


“You look very pretty this evening.”


It was really
Lubov chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Honestly, your JB's stories are better and better. This one is absolutely amazing, it's funny, cute and so interesting to read, it leave you flat, you only want to read more. The dialogues are so clever. I admire you. Hope you write more of this. I enjoyed it.
I Am Lady J chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Hot and sexy. I really, really loved the dialogue and sounded really in line with what was in the movie. Loved the interaction between Jennifer and Needy. I think that they're one of the hottest femmeslash pairings and this did it justice. Great fic.
DayDreamer007 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
damn... it couldn't get any better! Totally loved it! Please make another chapter! It is perfectly written, with the real character's tone. Man, if this was in the movie, I'll probably pee lol..
ThistleL chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
This was simply perfect and went along with my thoughts during the entire movie. :) I loved it. And the nick names were cute.
spashley20 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
“You’re not going to like actually ‘eat’ me, right? You’re just gonna … with your mouth … like you usually do, right?”

so funny. it has to be hard to write these characters, and this was just perfect.

awesome job!
BlaireBanner chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
I agree. That is the way the scene should've unfolded. I was disappointed at the fact that Needy doesn't really try to get Jennifer back. It just seem like she would've, you know?
gage chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
keep it going!
Diablo Priest chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
You captured the tone of these characters perfectly. There 's a lot of great phrases here: "I've got a demon renting out the basement of my soul..."! Great stuff. Needy afraid of Jennifer's love bites-bravo. I enjoyed all the cute flirting, too. Good job! But how do you expel a demon from your biff?
grangergirl22 chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
friggin awesome
FaberryFan chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Awesome :)
EmotionlessIdiot chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
love it

cant wait to read on and see if she gets the demon out of jennifer

update soon please x
VintageManniqueen chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Totally, 100%, without a doubt, my favorite fic EVER. I cannot even begin to tell you how absolutely PERFECT this was. Everything was so true to the characters- a totally valid alternate ending. You are my FAVORITE (underlined, bolded, capsed and underlined a few more times for good measure) fic writer. Should I be wondering if you're actually Diablo Cody with superpowers in the disguise of a fanfic writer?
MaxximumRide666 chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
You are an absolutely amazing writer as it is, but i just think you get better with each new story and it's so depressing for the rest of us mere mortals cos we gotta try and keep up!

Heh anyway, i totally loved this story! It wouldn't be right if Jennifer and Needy weren't together, if i'm honest!

This had everything a full length novel should have, and it's all packed in to a couple of pages, i love it XD

You got the scary parts, when you don't know what's gonna happen next, you got the sweetness between the girls, which i adore btw XD, then you have the humour, the biting bit? Funny as! Made me actually lol XD

And, of course, as all good stories should have, you got the brilliantly written femslash romance! I love it D

Seriously, keep writing!
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