|Reviews for A Believable Courtship|
| RubieRedSlippers chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
I loved it! Very witty and "believable," as you put it. Very understandable one-shot-you got all the background in there with a good description of where the story is going to go so that the reader (AKA myself) gets a view of the full story. Very well written, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Quick fix: I believe the word "his" should be "this" in the following line.
"She would have described what he had been doing up to his point as pure seduction."
Fabulous over all! I can't wait to read more!
| JeniNeji chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Very good story, I liked it very much!
| transmigratory chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
I really enjoyed this, and their interaction and chemistry was great.
Definitely a favorite.
| JazzQuirk chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
I really liked it. This story had a great balance of dialouge and description. I think it's a great one-shot, but you did leave me all hot and bothered at the end, so shame on you for that ;)
| MagisticalM chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
A sequel!A sequel!plz..or continue this fic?plz
| J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Cute! I look forward to more... robots? Okay, if you can write this well for a one shot, I look forward to a longer RK fic with robots.
| kokoronagomu chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
love how he's playing with her, and she's not having it. it seems that he appreciates her strength of will and character. hot seduction- just wonderful!
| xCrimzon chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
It's cute. XD
I'm going to favorite it. :)
| Tsuki-kage chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Please continue this! it was so funny and so well written!
| Stubbs101 chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
you can't leave this as a one shot. Don't make me fetch the puppies with big eyes!
| policis chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
I know I can read and also that my brain can comprehend what my eyes read, but "one-shot" and what I read through does not jive in my mind. It's perfect for a series. ep! I wish there's more of it, but i'd hate to piss off an author whose works i love.
So here's to hoping that you'll be attached to the fic and get more ideas AND continue... *crosses fingers* :D
Who's the threat?
| sapphirehimitsu chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
This one-shot is so fun to read! Simply love it! A playful and sexy Kenshin as the King and Kaoru as his personal guard.. Enjoy the playful interaction they had! Makes me feel like reading more of such fics.. Hehe.. Will be looking forward to your next story or one-shot! D
| poems2songs chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
nice story... cute and funny... really liked it... good job... great work!