|Reviews for A Believable Courtship|
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
I am pretty impressed with the plot of the story and how it goes so far. Just wondering if I would ever get to see the dark side of Kenshin, aka the Battousai? And perhaps kaoru as a Queen-Soldier. It would be quite cool to see a queen who knows how to fight and knows war tactics that can be use to protect the country.
| callalily32 chapter 3 . 12/19/2012
awwww this story is so cute! I love it. It's so great to read good KK fics!
| Featherhart chapter 3 . 12/16/2012
This story just keeps getting better! I'm so glad that you added a third chapter to it!
| Jacal Ste. Worme chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
Oh, man! I know, I understand that it's still sort of complete, but therecan be MORE! ;) Either way, GREAT JOB!
| Jacal Ste. Worme chapter 2 . 12/12/2012
AWWW! That's just adorable! I LOVE IT!
| Jacal Ste. Worme chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
WAOH! This is awesome! LOVE LOVe the dynamic
| Azhwi chapter 3 . 12/9/2012
/That's/ why I don't even remember this last chapter! Is that also why there was no alert sent out?
SO glad for the extra surprise when I wandered in for a quick read. Definitely turning on the alert. Maybe that will trigger if there is a next time.
I really liked this chapter. It really shows that Kaoru is sticking to her priorities and that at her core, she's still thinking of protecting him. Even if he's making it excessively difficult.
Thank you so much for this chapter! Cheers!
| noname00 chapter 3 . 12/8/2012
| amie689 chapter 3 . 12/5/2012
The first 2 chapters had my heart
I have no words to say about this... except thank you for continuing this..
by the way thank you for dropping by and faving my art.
| somniloquy chapter 3 . 11/29/2012
So cute! I can't help but feel the 2nd chapter moved so quickly though. Of course, I know you meant the first chapter as a one-shot, but I didn't really feel as though their relationship developed enough to spur Kenshin's love for Kaoru.
| Asioleshion chapter 3 . 11/26/2012
The more I read the more I like this story. This is my fave chapter so far! Poor Kenshin, but I just loved reading his reaction to what he thought was going on with Kaoru and Aoshi. Kenshin' POVs are my favourite. I do hope you come up with more. It would be so cool to see Kaoru like the member of the guard she is, and even the warrior Queen and King they would make :D
| Asioleshion chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
Raised i do to protect indeed. I have always felt frustrated that in the manga and anime, Kaoru's protective instinct got squandered and her fighting skills mostly overlooked and never put to use. She always had to stay back and watch Kenshin, Sano and even her young pupil do all the work. She could have done so much more!
But anyhow, I love the interaction between them and how he proposed to her. So sweet!
| Asioleshion chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
I love this story, I can just imagine Kaoru dressed in armor and riding a horse :D
| Brukaoru chapter 3 . 11/22/2012
I remember re-reading this fic not long ago. Hard to believe it's been years since it was created, since it remains fresh in mind and I still think of it from time to time.
It's delightful to see a new chapter and now that we've gotten more details in this universe, perhaps we will see more chapters in the future. I do hope so. I think you can expand on this quite a lot!
It's a bit surprising that Kenshin jumped to conclusions so quickly when he overheard Kaoru and Aoshi talking, but I think that partly comes from his duty as a king (and also because he's quite obsessed with her). I'm glad he found out the truth and made himself confront the fear, so as not to prolong his agony. And I love the fact that he doesn't even know his own laws but Kaoru not only knows but sticks by them to insure their future together.
Lovely writing as always, I hope to see more from you!
| unsigned chapter 3 . 11/21/2012
Oh my gosh, you updated! This is one of the most amusing KK fanfics I've seen here and I remember being sad that it only had two chapters. The third installment didn't disappoint either. Thanks for this addition. I hope you'll add more chapters someday.